Should colleges force students take course on reading novel, poetry and other imaginative poetry.
In the oscar wining movie "Good will hunting ",the professor makes a bold statement by saying that "engineering ,medicine and corporate exapnsion is important but what humans live for is
love and poetry an art filled with imagination" .This statement clearly highlights the importance of imagination in personal as well as later stages in life. It is the creative arts of ALbert einstein that made him famous on the theory of relativity
not the dates of places where he was forced to remember at school.However, some people might posit the idea that college is for learning facts and and creativity can be left at a table in the art class .But these people fail
to recognize certain aspects of knowledge and what college courses are meant for .Thus,although college is meant for studying facts and teaching students the theoretical grasp ion subject matter the creative sides cannot be overlooked.
Firstly, free writing and novels bring out the the practical side of situations .For instance,a study done on University of California Berkeley revealed that students who took the class for A310 "Applications for the Geosysnthesis in buildings " had a better
understanding of the subject matter .iT WAS REVEALED THAT STUDENTS were prone to understand better when things were presented in a pragmatic way. Likewise,the classes on creative minds actually open up the senses
and connect neurons to a better upholding for retention says the latest paper on neural networks.Thus studnets who show a practical grasp of things can actually excel in their theoretical courses making them successful in
their careers .
Secondly, such imaginative courses helps to stimulate relaxation .Scientific research done in University of Cambridge showed that around seventy percent of all students on their campus suffer from ADHD and Anxiety related disorders.
They also noted that students were more likely to perform better when they had something free to study apart from theoretical courses that focus on obscene impratical and archaic study models.Likewise ,my own experience is a compelling example of
this ,when I was in the 11th grade ,I was very busy to take extracurriculars such as "Music Creation ".My scores plummetted and that year was one of the worst years of my life.Next year ,I took on Music Creation 101
for my A level Course .That Course really gave me the opportunity to open up to and realease my repressed emotions .Thus such courses benefit us by stimulating relaxation 9which give an upward trend in test scores and
improve the overall mental health of the student.
However, some people might believe that people solely go to school for learning facts and they are uninterested in creative parts of the curriculum .They may argue that future Scientists and mathematicians might not contend
to such courses such as "Poetry and playing musical instruments .They further may put forth the idea that school is for teaching a set of directions to students and college courses should only involve their msubject matter
like engineering courses should only have maths and phsyics related content whereas art should only teach how to paint i.e a conglomorate would be unacceptable .Likewise,they might believe that college courses should be
specific to the students choices as they have gone through high school to get here so they know whats the best for them.
Nevertheless ,these people forget that college system ,for instance the education system in US have introduced Liberal arts as a curriculum where they teach a variety of subjects which promote the imaginative and creative
side of the individual .Lets face facts here not all students know what they want to do at college .People like "Mark zukerberg " a college dropout did not contend to the theoretical classes at Harvard ,so Harvard Computer scientists
are now able to take a language courses along with a creative course such as drama which has significantly improved the well being of the students .Moreover, most students in a recent poll at the University of exeter have
agreed that a diverse curriculkum which involves free writing has prepared them to face the real world rather that a fixed set of course in a particular field.
In conclusion,I strongly believe that creative courses should be offered and some of the courses should be mandatory for the students .I feel this way because it enchance their practicality ,mental health and prepares them
'for the real world .
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 19.5258426966 128% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 14.8657303371 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 28.0 11.3162921348 247% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 61.0 33.0505617978 185% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 84.0 58.6224719101 143% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 12.9106741573 116% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3830.0 2235.4752809 171% => OK
No of words: 727.0 442.535393258 164% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26822558459 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.19258485972 4.55969084622 114% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90221213429 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 371.0 215.323595506 172% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.510316368638 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 1163.7 704.065955056 165% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 6.24550561798 272% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 20.2370786517 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 80.0 23.0359550562 347% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 230.096973652 60.3974514979 381% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
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Paragraphs: 22.0 4.97078651685 443% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 77.0 7.80617977528 986% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227545089303 0.243740707755 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0980779550363 0.0831039109588 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0441555001736 0.0758088955206 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.069234732803 0.150359130593 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0529414928686 0.0667264976115 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 43.8 14.1392134831 310% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -9.72 48.8420337079 -20% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.92365168539 201% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 34.5 12.1743820225 283% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.47 12.1639044944 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.49 8.38706741573 137% => OK
difficult_words: 179.0 100.480337079 178% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 11.8971910112 240% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 34.0 11.2143820225 303% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 29.0 11.7820224719 246% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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