Society should make efforts to save endangered species only if the potential extinction of those species is the result of human activities.
Society is defined by the people who live in it.These people can either make or break the society.Along with humans we should also consider the well being of animals and other living things to maintain the balance of ecosystem.The authors statement regarding the society making efforts to save endangered species only if the potential extinction of those species is the result of human activities , I disagree with the part where the author states “only if ”it is a result of humans as both human and natural activities should be taken into consideration while preserving the endangered species.
Firstly,the endangered species should be preserved irrespective of the fact that they are affect by human or natural activity.In fact , more care should be taken to preserve them for any natural calamity as human intervention can be evidently seen and hence stopped while on the other hand natural calamities cannot be accurately predicted .Hence more care should be taken to protect the species from various natural causes.For instance , if a zoo is keeping an endangered species , they should be prepared for calamities like floods and earthquakes where they would move these species to a much more secure location in case of a rainy day.
Secondly,utmost care should be taken for the nourishment of those endangered species.As every species of animal is unique , their dietary habits should also be followed with care.It is the responsibility of the people looking after them to feed them regularly and have them checked up on a regular basis which would prevent them getting extinct on natural causes or diseases.
However,human actions play a very important role when considering the preservation of the endangered species.As humans we are responsible for maintaining the balance in ecosystem and also helping in ameliorating the damages caused to other living things .For instance, with the advent of infrastructural development humans are chopping down forests to build their own homes. They are replacing the animals homes with their own. With lesser and lesser forests these animals would inturn get extinct if this rapid development is not curbed.We as humans should be much more responsible in preserving this balance in the environment.
In sum,I would like to say that both natural and human activities should be given equal importance when considering the preservation of endangered species. Society should do everything in their power to preserve these species so that they can live for as long as they can.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, however, if, look, regarding, second, secondly, so, well, while, for instance, in fact, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 12.4196629213 161% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 33.0505617978 103% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 58.6224719101 90% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 12.9106741573 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2148.0 2235.4752809 96% => OK
No of words: 403.0 442.535393258 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3300248139 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48049772903 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89154197518 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 215.323595506 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.483870967742 0.4932671777 98% => OK
syllable_count: 675.9 704.065955056 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.2370786517 40% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 50.0 23.0359550562 217% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 206.373447905 60.3974514979 342% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 268.5 118.986275619 226% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 50.375 23.4991977007 214% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 16.75 5.21951772744 321% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 26.0 7.80617977528 333% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.355238815956 0.243740707755 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.151740901177 0.0831039109588 183% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.146384873341 0.0758088955206 193% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216861111242 0.150359130593 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.154336720366 0.0667264976115 231% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 28.9 14.1392134831 204% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 12.27 48.8420337079 25% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.92365168539 184% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.0 12.1743820225 197% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.52 12.1639044944 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.84 8.38706741573 117% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 100.480337079 95% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 59.0 11.8971910112 496% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 22.0 11.2143820225 196% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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