Some people argue that confidence and optimism are critical to achieving a dream, while others believe that selfless hard work is the only way to reach a goal.
Write a response in which you determine which view bears the closest resemblance to your own. In justifying your reasoning and supporting your position, be sure to include your reaction to both of the views presented.
Every person in their life has a dream that they long for. Some people strive towards their goals with confidence and optimism while others put extreme hard work even with the absence of confidence. I am a person like many others, who believe that confidence and optimism can take us to our goals rather than merely hard work.
A diffident person mostly fear for the future even when giving full. In the absence of confidence, people tend to give up thinking that their efforts are hardly going to be prolific. So instead of killing their time and enervating themselves with futile efforts, they will want to change their dreams. Similar is the case with optimism, where we fear the impediments and become forlorn. Both the cases lead us to either changing our destinations or completely conceding to the hurdles.
We already know that progressing towards a goal brings us confidence, the converse is also true. Confidence and optimism help us create a path to progress towards success. From believing that we can accomplish what we want to, we gradually try various paths and think of different possibilities, finally hoping to find one, which we will.
An individual who believes he can reach his dreams, who is sanguine and confident, knows the path and hence puts selfless hardwork that helps him reach his goals. The other way round, that is, working hard in a path he has no belief that it’s the one he needs to take, only makes his efforts useless. What is the point in putting such precious time and muscle into something when you know it is not leading to success? That is the time to be optimistic that there will be another way, time to be confident that we can find that other way.
With confidence and optimism when we find that one way, we will know where to put our hardwork. So, always giving us the hope to succeed and helping us to envision a realistic path paving to our dreams and giving us the strength and faith to put our hard work in the right place, confidence and optimism are primary for any individual to achieve his or her dreams.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, hence, if, so, while, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 22.0 11.3162921348 194% => OK
Pronoun: 55.0 33.0505617978 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 58.6224719101 65% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1723.0 2235.4752809 77% => OK
No of words: 365.0 442.535393258 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72054794521 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43794671027 2.79657885939 87% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 215.323595506 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53698630137 0.4932671777 109% => OK
syllable_count: 517.5 704.065955056 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.5178349326 60.3974514979 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.352941176 118.986275619 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4705882353 23.4991977007 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.64705882353 5.21951772744 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191856293767 0.243740707755 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0597132366096 0.0831039109588 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0548667606895 0.0758088955206 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110603581157 0.150359130593 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0681919432123 0.0667264976115 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 14.1392134831 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 48.8420337079 137% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 12.1639044944 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 8.38706741573 90% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 100.480337079 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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