Some people believe that government funding of the arts is necessary to ensure that the arts can flourish and be available to all people. Others believe that government funding of the arts threatens the integrity of the arts.
The statement posets that according to some people, government funding of the arts is necessary as it will ensure that the arts can flourish and be available to all people. On the other hand, some people believe that government funding of the arts threatens the integrity of the arts. I agree that the government funding is necessary to encourage artists to develope their magnum opus and that needs to be flourish by the people for that it is necessary that arts should be available to people.
The great art defines the culture of the society, this is well known. Some of the great artists of history: painters like Gallelio, Da Winchi, Piccaso; Writers, Poets. Also artists who developed great architecturial stuctures for example, Taj Mahal of India, Pyramid of Egypt contributed to the maxims of the society, Some of the great poems like Mahabharat, Ramayana; Other believed to be sacred arts like Kuran, Bible defined the way of living. This shows that art has always remained an important part of the human life. Art defines the culture of the country and also enlightens future generation with their values. So. it is important that these arts should be available to people, then only it can be flourished. The government should pay importance to the artist. Funding for the great arts motivates artists to work more on the art.
Another reason for my agreement to the statement that government should provide funding to the arts is that just creating art is not important, making it available to all people will motivate more people to create it. People will understand the value of it, they will cherish their own culture. Also making it available to all people will make sure that future generation will get to know about the lifestyle of their ancestors.
Some people argue that government funding of the arts threatens the integrity of the arts. Integrity of the arts depends on the people who value it and government who preserves it. So, when government is funding the arts it will be more cautious about preserving its integrity, and hence, funding by the government will further secure the integrity of the arts rather than diminishing it.
In sum, I believe that arts is an integral part of any culture, religion or country, and hence government should encourage arts and artist by providing funds to them. And it should be available to public. that government funding is necessary for the arts to be flourished by the people.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 71, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: Some
...ure of the society, this is well known. Some of the great artists of history: painters like...
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Line 3, column 169, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...io, Da Winchi, Piccaso; Writers, Poets. Also artists who developed great architectur...
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Line 3, column 319, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: Some
...ntributed to the maxims of the society, Some of the great poems like Mahabharat, Ramayana; ...
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Line 3, column 843, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ivates artists to work more on the art. Another reason for my agreement to the s...
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Line 5, column 296, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...t, they will cherish their own culture. Also making it available to all people will ...
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Line 7, column 113, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...grity of the arts. Integrity of the arts depends on the people who value it and g...
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Line 9, column 206, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: That
.... And it should be available to public. that government funding is necessary for the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, may, so, then, well, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.3162921348 168% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 33.0505617978 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 58.6224719101 92% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 12.9106741573 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2042.0 2235.4752809 91% => OK
No of words: 415.0 442.535393258 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92048192771 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51348521516 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58597443023 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 215.323595506 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.407228915663 0.4932671777 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 632.7 704.065955056 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.4790516627 60.3974514979 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.1 118.986275619 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.75 23.4991977007 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.65 5.21951772744 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 10.2758426966 165% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.660483627188 0.243740707755 271% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.251438813937 0.0831039109588 303% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.175758129235 0.0758088955206 232% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.444628220254 0.150359130593 296% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.163184444118 0.0667264976115 245% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 14.1392134831 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 48.8420337079 122% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.1639044944 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 100.480337079 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 71, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: Some
...ure of the society, this is well known. Some of the great artists of history: painters like...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 169, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...io, Da Winchi, Piccaso; Writers, Poets. Also artists who developed great architectur...
^^^^
Line 3, column 319, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: Some
...ntributed to the maxims of the society, Some of the great poems like Mahabharat, Ramayana; ...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 843, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ivates artists to work more on the art. Another reason for my agreement to the s...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 296, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...t, they will cherish their own culture. Also making it available to all people will ...
^^^^
Line 7, column 113, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...grity of the arts. Integrity of the arts depends on the people who value it and g...
^^
Line 9, column 206, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: That
.... And it should be available to public. that government funding is necessary for the...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, may, so, then, well, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.3162921348 168% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 33.0505617978 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 58.6224719101 92% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 12.9106741573 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2042.0 2235.4752809 91% => OK
No of words: 415.0 442.535393258 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92048192771 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51348521516 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58597443023 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 215.323595506 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.407228915663 0.4932671777 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 632.7 704.065955056 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.4790516627 60.3974514979 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.1 118.986275619 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.75 23.4991977007 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.65 5.21951772744 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 10.2758426966 165% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.660483627188 0.243740707755 271% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.251438813937 0.0831039109588 303% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.175758129235 0.0758088955206 232% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.444628220254 0.150359130593 296% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.163184444118 0.0667264976115 245% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 14.1392134831 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 48.8420337079 122% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.1639044944 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 100.480337079 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.