Some people believe that government funding of the arts is necessary to ensure
that the arts can flourish and be available to all people. Others believe that
government funding of the arts threatens the integrity of the arts.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own
position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and
supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented.
Art can manifest in various mediums, including painting, sculpture, music, dance, literature, theater, film, photography, and more. Adequate funding plays a vital role in nurturing and expanding the artistic landscape in various ways. So, I mostly agree with the belief that government funding is necessary to ensure the flourishing of the arts and its accessibility to all people.
Many artistic endeavors would have been struggled to exist unless adequate funding is provided to them. Artist, particularly in marginal communities, often face financial obstacles that impede their ability to focus fully on their artistic creativity. In the late 20th century and onwards, the advent of digital technology has had a profound impact on the arts. The availability of computer, internet, digital tools revolutionized artistic creation. Hence, it compels the artist to be on equal footing to pull through this competitive market. By providing funding, the government can help level the playing field and create opportunities for artists who might otherwise be overlooked or unable to pursue their artistic aspirations.
In addition, for the production of large scale projects which require significant resources’ government funding is required. For instance, ‘Shilpokola art exhibition’ can be organized to showcase and promote artistic talent, cultural diversity and creative expression that provides artist to display their art to wider audience, allowing them to gain recognition and potentially sell their artwork. These funds can be used to cover various expenses associated with organizing an exhibition.
People are not born with equal facilities. The government funding can encourage the people from each background and promote cultural cohesion. It can, thereby, enrich society as a whole by preserving authenticity of traditional art from diverse background. The art can play a vital role in shaping our identity and facilitating the exchange of idea. So government funding can assure that the facilities of art is accessible to everyone.
Some critics argue that government funding can pressurize the integrity of the art. There might be political interference on the freedom of the artist. They claimed that government may dictate the types of art would be worthy of support which will potentially impede the creativity of the artist. These claims have not been convincingly refuted. Therefore, equality should be maintained between government funding and artistic autonomy to prevent the deterioration of artistic expression.
The government funding may impair the integrity of the arts yet the pragmatic view demonstrate the necessity to ensure the flourishment and accessibility of arts. In order to restrain the integrity of the art, transparent and independent fund allotment mechanism should be established. It is crucial to safeguard artistic autonomy as well as the diversity of artistic expression. it can be concluded that, arts and funding share a complex and interconnected relationship, as the financial support available for the arts significantly impacts the accessibility, sustainability and growth of artistic endeavors
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, look, may, so, then, therefore, well, for instance, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 12.4196629213 153% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 33.0505617978 76% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 58.6224719101 97% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 12.9106741573 155% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2688.0 2235.4752809 120% => OK
No of words: 470.0 442.535393258 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.71914893617 5.05705443957 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65612321451 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17231402589 2.79657885939 113% => OK
Unique words: 259.0 215.323595506 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551063829787 0.4932671777 112% => OK
syllable_count: 846.0 704.065955056 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.2370786517 128% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.0259969708 60.3974514979 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.384615385 118.986275619 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0769230769 23.4991977007 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.30769230769 5.21951772744 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 10.2758426966 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.398604771387 0.243740707755 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123106348672 0.0831039109588 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106923735705 0.0758088955206 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.245819055009 0.150359130593 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0970096408313 0.0667264976115 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 14.1392134831 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 48.8420337079 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.6 12.1639044944 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.8 8.38706741573 117% => OK
difficult_words: 157.0 100.480337079 156% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.83 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.25 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.