Some people believe that our ever-increasing use of technology significantly reduces our opportunities for human interaction. Other people believe that technology provides us with new and better ways to communicate and connect with one another.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented.
Nowadays, people spend more and more time on their mobile phones and computers, as a result, the interaction between people has been significantly reduced.
When we open the computer, so much news that comes from everywhere in the world is flashing on the screen. People are likely attracted by unimportant news. Also, there are many games on computers, thus, people are willing to spend most of their time in front of their computers, and the interaction between people becomes less and less. Nowadays, when we want to find some information about a field, we often search for it on a computer, while people were likely to ask a friend or teacher in the past. As technology develops, people can do many things without talking to anyone, so the interaction between people is sharply reduced due to technical development.
I acknowledge that there are many substitute ways for a real meeting nowadays, people can stay home and watch other people's videos, or people can talk to someone on their mobile phones no matter how long the distance is. Someone will say that technology provides us with a better way to connect with someone else. However, I think this kind of communication is not enough for intimate friends. Using mobile phones or computers, people can hear each other, even see each other, but they can't touch each other. No matter how technology develops, people will never have the same feeling as a real meeting using a mobile phone or a computer.
In order to increase connections between people and promote relationships with friends or their own families, people should spend less time on modern technology. It is human nature that everyone wants to explore the world due to their curiosity, but most of the information on computers is meaningless. People should not indulge themselves in the virtual world, but they should spend more time with families and friends. Only those people around you can help you when you are in need.
In sum, I will more closely align with the first statement. Although technology facilitates our life, nowadays, people are not likely to talk to each other, I think people should leave the virtual world and spend more time with their families.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 487, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, thus, while, i think, kind of, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 33.0505617978 91% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 58.6224719101 77% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1836.0 2235.4752809 82% => OK
No of words: 370.0 442.535393258 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96216216216 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38581623665 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58314478132 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 215.323595506 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.491891891892 0.4932671777 100% => OK
syllable_count: 567.0 704.065955056 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.77640449438 281% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.5061096053 60.3974514979 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.0 118.986275619 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7647058824 23.4991977007 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.52941176471 5.21951772744 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302502163183 0.243740707755 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101696125104 0.0831039109588 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.066076428344 0.0758088955206 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171956988892 0.150359130593 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0496786042474 0.0667264976115 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 14.1392134831 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 48.8420337079 120% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.1639044944 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.38706741573 90% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 100.480337079 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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