Sports stars and movie stars have an obligation to behave as role models for the young people who look up to them. In return for the millions of dollars that they are paid, we should expect them to fulfill this societal responsibility.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons or examples that could be used to challenge your position
Any famous Sports Star or a Movie star would have huge fan following not just in their country but also across the globe. They set the trends, they are the ones whom people try to follow. They are like idols for some young crowd. You ask any school going kid, there are high chances, a kid would say that he would like to become someone like a famous football player, a cricket player or someone like dashing handsome movie actor/ bold beautiful movie actress. In a country like India, Sachin Tendulkar is not just considered as a great cricket player of all the time but he is considered to be the God. People literally worship him as a god of cricket. Similarly, South Indian Movie actor Rajnikanth is considered as a god or as an emotion by his fellow fans across the globe. So considering such a huge visibility these personalities should set the right examples in front of the society as young people look up to them.
Now someone like famous film star who indulges in extra marital affair would certainly set a wrong example among the young crowd. Youngsters might feel that it is okay to be disloyal to your partner as it's cool, even a film star does the same.
There have been news about players taking drugs to boost their energy levels, this certainly sets a wrong example for young player. Young player might consider taking drugs as a shortcut for success. So, sports player should never fall prey for such drugs, instead they should discourage young players from considering drugs as a ultimate solution for the easy success.
Movie stars play role of various shades in the films. In the films they may portray a villain, ani-social personality. But, in reality, when they are in public place they should follow the decency. Their single move is observed by the media, common man when they are at the restaurants, air-ports, bars etc.
So it's not only sports stars or movie stars who have obligations to behave as a role model but it's a responsibility of an every single person to behave in perfect possible manner to set the right goals for the entire new generation. Young people have penchant to follow bad things easily as these are easy to follow. So sports stars and movie stars should not behave as a role model because they are being paid very high but because they are a responsible citizen first. They are the ones who can easily influence the young crowd to do the right things in a right approach which would help country build a strong future generation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, may, similarly, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 33.0505617978 91% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 58.6224719101 75% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2048.0 2235.4752809 92% => OK
No of words: 441.0 442.535393258 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64399092971 5.05705443957 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58257569496 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33684663958 2.79657885939 84% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 215.323595506 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.498866213152 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 622.8 704.065955056 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.9397466942 60.3974514979 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.5238095238 118.986275619 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 23.4991977007 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.19047619048 5.21951772744 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 10.2758426966 165% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.342659787193 0.243740707755 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0998390498763 0.0831039109588 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0790728151708 0.0758088955206 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175284966999 0.150359130593 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0903628432596 0.0667264976115 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 14.1392134831 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 48.8420337079 137% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 12.1639044944 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.18 8.38706741573 86% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 100.480337079 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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