Sports stars and movie stars have an obligation to behave as role models for the young people who look up to them. In return for the millions of dollars that they are paid, we should expect them to fulfill this societal responsibility.
One can agree or disagree with the given contemption.I firmly agree with this thing that the sportstars and movie stars should be role models for young people who look up to them.what is an role model?.The one we think or we make up in mind that yes we love him for his sport of play and we want to be likehim through external and internal personality is called a role model.Now days young people have number of role models from different disiplines.Thus these people should considere as a societal responsibility and behave as a role model for the young people.
Many young people today watch sports as well as movie and consider there best player or actor as there role model.They start doing things like them whether in public or in home,they start to imitate them because they actually like them and wants to be like those people in future.For example a young lad loving football game will definitely consider cristiano ronaldoas his role model and will try to imitate him in every aspect.So these sport stars and movie star must take it as a responsibility and behave as a role model to make the young generation god and so that they can achieve there dreams.
Today salman khan is the most favourite actor in bollywood as well as hollywood.Many people consider him as there role model,if they are ask what they want to become they answer i want to be like salman khan that's the dedication this young generation possess.So actors like salman khan are paid millions in contract by many companies for branding for there product.so they must consider it as a societal responsibility and trynot to do negative things in public so that no followers can see those and start trying that negative things because there role model does it.
Many positive things can be created or changes can be made if these celebraties take the initiative of being a role model.Suppose a natural calamity takes place in an area and that place needs an help with both the financial and man power requsting to such celebrities to ask for help for there fans can bring a huge amount of help to that place.For example trecently deluge took place in kolhapur by which maximum percentage of district was under devastation and were in need of help,but as soon as Amitabh bachan considered as king of bollywood asked his fans for help through social networking within less than a day number of people for personal help as well as with huge donations arrived kolhapur.So this is the best example we can see that positive changes can take place if these celebrities consider to behave as a role models for young people.
Now days different people have different role models in different fields.right from sharaukh khan to salman khan in bollywood,mahendrasingh dhoni to virat kohli in international cricket,cristiano ronaldo tolionel messi in international football,robertdowney jr. to dwayne johnson in hollywood.so it becomes these peoples societal responsibility to behave as a role model because number of young genaration people are looking to them and want to be like them in there future.so merely we can say that the young generation to be on good track depends on there role models for some extent.so being a role model is what the celebrities should accept as a societal responsibility.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, if, look, so, thus, well, for example, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 14.8657303371 148% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 33.0505617978 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 68.0 58.6224719101 116% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2721.0 2235.4752809 122% => OK
No of words: 557.0 442.535393258 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88509874327 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.85807034144 4.55969084622 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92018153568 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 237.0 215.323595506 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.425493716338 0.4932671777 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 878.4 704.065955056 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 20.2370786517 30% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 92.0 23.0359550562 399% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 181.088759698 60.3974514979 300% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 453.5 118.986275619 381% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 92.8333333333 23.4991977007 395% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 10.6666666667 5.21951772744 204% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 33.0 7.80617977528 423% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.4028195779 0.243740707755 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.227939760037 0.0831039109588 274% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.125394403169 0.0758088955206 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.256644685131 0.150359130593 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107820720581 0.0667264976115 162% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 48.0 14.1392134831 339% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -21.9 48.8420337079 -45% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.92365168539 201% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 39.2 12.1743820225 322% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.27 12.1639044944 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.29 8.38706741573 135% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 100.480337079 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 55.0 11.8971910112 462% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 38.8 11.2143820225 346% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 39.0 11.7820224719 331% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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