Teachers salaries should be based on their students academic performance Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim In developing and supporting your position be sure to address the most compelling reaso

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Teachers' salaries should be based on their students' academic performance.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position

Perhaps some of the most important figures in our lives that help in our growth as people of the society and shape our personalities are our teachers. Every time a student excels in his or her performance, be it related to academia or sports, the teachers are given due credit for their efforts in educating the child. Although teachers should be rewarded when their students give a good performance and criticized, only to a certain extent, when their students collectively perform poorly, a teacher’s salary must not be based on their students’ academic performance.

Any class contains different kinds of students. There are students that are extremely dedicated to their academics and consistently perform exceptionally well. There are also students that show no interest in their academics, maybe because their interest lies elsewhere outside the classroom or because they lack the focus or interest in school. Every teacher, during their career, have students of the latter type that they try to focus more on and consistently try to improve their performance in class. However, sometimes, the teachers are unable to get through these students. To no fault of the teacher, the student might keep performing poorly in their classes. There could be several reasons for this. The student might be facing personal issues, maybe at their homes that affect their academic performance or might be investing more of their time in pursuing other talents. In such cases, it is unfair to limit the teacher’s salary because of the student’s poor performance. The teacher might have tried his or her best to inculcate the student’s interest in the particular subject but failed to do so. The efforts of the teacher are visible in the performance of other students, including good as well as average performers. However, the performance of just a few bad students must not be a reason to determine a lower salary for a teacher. Sometimes, the poor performance of a student depends on a student and not the teacher.

Moreover, a good performance is a highly subjective metric. For say, a student who has shown average to poor performance up until now and has been improving his or her performance recently, might still not be considered a student with a good performance. However, one cannot deny that improvement in his or her performance is also a very positive aspect and credit must be given to the teacher. A very difficult subject might show average performance of the students over the years but without a teacher’s efforts, it would be expected to be worse. Determining that the teacher deserves lesser salary because the average performance of the students is not good enough as compared to other subjects that might be easier, is unfair.

However, it is certainly true that determining a teacher’s salary based on their students’ performance can incentivize teachers to put in more efforts in their classrooms. Teachers shall spend more time on focusing on students that do not perform well and try to engage more students in the classroom.

Although tying up a teacher’s salary with their student’s performance can provide incentives to teachers to teach well, determining the bar for good performance becomes a tricky situation. Also, the performance of a few bad students might affect the overall performance of the class. Hence, a teacher can be provided benefits for his or her students’ performance but their salary should not be dependent on it.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, may, moreover, so, still, well, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 19.5258426966 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 12.4196629213 161% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 33.0505617978 151% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 68.0 58.6224719101 116% => OK
Nominalization: 24.0 12.9106741573 186% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2921.0 2235.4752809 131% => OK
No of words: 569.0 442.535393258 129% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13356766257 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.88402711743 4.55969084622 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9147488334 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 231.0 215.323595506 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.405975395431 0.4932671777 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 898.2 704.065955056 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 14.0 4.99550561798 280% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.2370786517 128% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.114661427 60.3974514979 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.346153846 118.986275619 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8846153846 23.4991977007 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.80769230769 5.21951772744 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294457652218 0.243740707755 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110108722561 0.0831039109588 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0672738522379 0.0758088955206 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210363351958 0.150359130593 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0284823680815 0.0667264976115 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 14.1392134831 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.1639044944 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 100.480337079 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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