Technology causes more problems for modern societies than it solves.
The topic raises the controversial issue that technology causes more problems for modern societies than it solves.A rapid growth of technology is seen in recent years.This growth reflects different gadgets and machines , used to make our work at ease. Many problems are being faced due to these technologies.This rapid development causes a detrimental effect on the people using them.
However, the technology widely being used is a mobile phone.Getting accustomed to the mobile phone , one might forget the real world and gets involved in it.They make our job easier, through making calls, texting to friends.But these may also lead to the waste of time. This is the major problem faced by people throughout the world.
Although, the invention of a calculator made it simple to evaluate a complex problem, it also changed the people to use their brains effectively.Even for a simple calculation, one needs to access the calculator.These type of technologies might initially solve the problems faced by the people, later on they become the main problem for the impeding development.
Nevertheless , the modern societies are accustomed to a wide variety of technologies and cannot even imagine their lives without them. Robots are the latest inventions which mostly replaces the humans and are capable of performing many tasks that the human can.This technology causes major problems in the modern society.In near future, robots completely replace humans and make them dull and lethargic.
In conclusion, although technology has many short term benefits, they are the reason for major problems in the society.People in the modern societies should reduce the use of technology which may in future can solve the major problems.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 33.0505617978 70% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 58.6224719101 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1463.0 2235.4752809 65% => OK
No of words: 271.0 442.535393258 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39852398524 5.05705443957 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.55969084622 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98741967724 2.79657885939 107% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 215.323595506 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564575645756 0.4932671777 114% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 704.065955056 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.2370786517 40% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 23.0359550562 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 90.3360912094 60.3974514979 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 182.875 118.986275619 154% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.875 23.4991977007 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 5.21951772744 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 7.80617977528 231% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 10.2758426966 10% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.389084107683 0.243740707755 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.162831107474 0.0831039109588 196% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.120084214241 0.0758088955206 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205427945132 0.150359130593 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111527025404 0.0667264976115 167% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.9 14.1392134831 148% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.52 48.8420337079 60% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.92365168539 164% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 12.1743820225 142% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.63 12.1639044944 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.7 8.38706741573 116% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 100.480337079 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 11.8971910112 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 11.2143820225 136% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.