Technology creates more problems than it solves, and may threaten or damage the quality of life.
The speaker states that technology creates more problems than it solves and may threaten or damage the quality of life. I strongly agree with this statement. technology has obviously made our life very simple but at the same time it has created too much complex problems to damage the quality of our life.
now we live in a golden age of technology. technology has made our life very easy. now we are able to solve the problems in a very easy manner which was considered to be very tough previously.For example, at one time communicating with people living in a long distance was considered infeasible. but now with development of modern communication devices it has become very easy. now we can easily communicate with people living in us from Asia. technology has also brought an immense change in our industrial process. Mass production is now very common as the machines are now so much developed and work with such a high efficiency that we can easily produce a lot of items within a very short period. process of industrialization has begun from 18th century. it has solved a lot of problems which were considered to be unsolvable previously.
technology not only solves problem, it can also create a lot of problems. For example, pollution grows rapidly with the progress of technology. As industries expand, there are more and more pollutants. these pollutants are being mixed with our various environmental elements and thus has started poisoning. Smokes coming from the mills and factories are polluting air tremendously. poisonous chemicals coming from the chemical plants are polluting sea and river water. They are also contaminating soil if these pollutants are exposed to our earth. our environment is being affected greatly due to immense expansion of technolgy. people are now suffering from various diseases due to these pollution. Another notable example is the depletion of ozon layer. due to this, people are now being much more exposed to harmful radiations of sunlight. For this reason, possibility of cancer is growing much more.
In summary, I can say that technology has created more problems than it solves. we are using technology in such a high rate that it has created a great threat to our own existence. our quality of life has degraded. Balanced use of technology can alleviate us from this great problem.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, thus, for example, in summary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 33.0505617978 112% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 58.6224719101 82% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1967.0 2235.4752809 88% => OK
No of words: 390.0 442.535393258 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04358974359 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44391917772 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85996188533 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 215.323595506 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.502564102564 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 634.5 704.065955056 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.2370786517 138% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 23.0359550562 56% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.0628333028 60.3974514979 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.25 118.986275619 59% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.9285714286 23.4991977007 59% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.89285714286 5.21951772744 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 7.80617977528 243% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 5.13820224719 234% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.305325506287 0.243740707755 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0906553688412 0.0831039109588 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.158933402937 0.0758088955206 210% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.263710167072 0.150359130593 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.207477845029 0.0667264976115 311% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 14.1392134831 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 48.8420337079 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 12.1743820225 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.36 12.1639044944 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 100.480337079 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 11.2143820225 64% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.