Undergraduate students majoring in Business or in the Sciences should not be required to take any courses in the Humanities since those courses won't benefit their future careers.
The argument claims that undergraduate students, studying business or sciences, cannot benefit from taking humanities courses and hence should be disallowed to take them. I disagree with the author's statement as I believe that all fields of study are related and stimulate our knowledge and intelligence in different ways.
Firstly, this argument suggests that careers in business do not require knowledge of humanities. That is far from the truth. Even in the most difficult business situations, on needs domain experience that can come from studying the subject. For instance, education, social sciences are humanities subjects. Managing institutions or preparing sustainable business solutions around these fields will need an in depth understanding of the two.
Secondly, the sciences and technology are touching our lives in every way. From radiocarbon dating to using data science to understand user behaviour and consumer psychology, more and more collaborative fields are emerging with the amalgamation of technology and humanities.
Additionally, the methods of studying are very disparate and hence this stimulates both the left and right side of our brains. This is one of the biggest reasons why an undergrad degree, with the right mix, can be both eye-opening and more suited to one's identity than having a degree in only one kind.
In conclusion, that although studying humanities while pursuing an undergraduate degree in business or finance can be taxing, but the long term benefits outweigh the short term difficulties and so it is advisable that undergraduate students should do humanities courses if they want a diverse portfolio or just for fun and learning.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: one's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, while, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 33.0505617978 57% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 58.6224719101 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1429.0 2235.4752809 64% => OK
No of words: 260.0 442.535393258 59% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49615384615 5.05705443957 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.55969084622 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03855647369 2.79657885939 109% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 215.323595506 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.607692307692 0.4932671777 123% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 704.065955056 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.2370786517 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 23.0359550562 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 138.707930559 60.3974514979 230% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 142.9 118.986275619 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 23.4991977007 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.8 5.21951772744 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233307300547 0.243740707755 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.08106356617 0.0831039109588 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0940757674165 0.0758088955206 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122220539622 0.150359130593 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0881501192296 0.0667264976115 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 14.1392134831 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 48.8420337079 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 12.1743820225 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.92 12.1639044944 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.6 8.38706741573 114% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 100.480337079 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.2143820225 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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