To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
The characteristics of a country is one the important parameter to define how development of country will take place and cities being part of the country helps us understand these characteristics. The issue here states that to understand most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities. I mostly agree with the given statement for 2 reasons.
First, people from different part of the countries come to major cities to have a better lifestyle so it is possible to find different culture staying together in one major city. For instance, Mumbai in India is a place where people from different part of the country come to settle. In Mumbai different cultural festivals take place throughout the year in peace and harmony, people not only celebrate their own cultural festival but festivals of different community as well. So we can see how people from all over the country can come together and stay peacefully which shows multiple important characteristics such as interdependence and harmony. Similarly different major cities can show different characteristics of country.
Further, major cities are not defined in the issue so there can be multiple major cities depending on the different aspects such as finance, culture, agricultural and many more. So for example, mumbai is the financial capital of india so the characteristics one could find in Mumbai will be different from varanasi or kashi which are cultural cities of India. So to find out all the different aspects of a country one must not stop at a define major cities with a bias on particular parameter, because it will limit the finding of characteristics and understanding of a country in a particular point of view.
On the other hand, if the major cities are defined by a particular parameter such as population or GDP, then the people wont be able to get a overall perspective of the country and some characteristics will stay hidden. but as the definition of the major cities is not clear then we can conclude that by seeing all major cities the overall characteristics of a country can be understood.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Similarly,
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Suggestion: But
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, similarly, so, then, well, for example, for instance, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 33.0505617978 33% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 58.6224719101 84% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1755.0 2235.4752809 79% => OK
No of words: 350.0 442.535393258 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01428571429 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07941287804 2.79657885939 110% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 215.323595506 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.434285714286 0.4932671777 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 567.0 704.065955056 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 23.0359550562 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.8695553544 60.3974514979 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.0 118.986275619 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.9230769231 23.4991977007 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.38461538462 5.21951772744 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191815342763 0.243740707755 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0948853136775 0.0831039109588 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0622033034857 0.0758088955206 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146117065311 0.150359130593 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0772563715694 0.0667264976115 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 14.1392134831 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 48.8420337079 92% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 12.1743820225 110% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.1639044944 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.38706741573 90% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 100.480337079 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.2143820225 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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