Unfortunately, in contemporary society, creating an appealing image has become more important than the reality or truth behind the image.
Society is the class on which every affluent person, family or conglomerate is dependent for their business. Society judges any product, company or person on various factor's and one of it is behaviour or quality. In case of human being, behaviour of person is a discipline which implicitly states way more like good at talking, treating other's, how solicitous he/she is any many more. A part of society, judges person on other scale like smartness, look and ability to influence. However, it varies from person to person and society to society, but at end the person always tries to create an generous image for easy attraction of people on any topic or thing.
First is the example of Sir Ratan Tata, ex-CEO of TATA Group, which one of the largest conglomerate in India. He started as intern at the office and climbed till the position of CEO on skills and knowledge. He is also know for his generosity like donating more than 66% of net profit in charity for the welfare of poor's. He was also the largest sum donor in Covid-19 pandemic for the medicine of virus to poor people by Government of India. Today everyone blindly follow's his saying, its not because he is affluent person but because of his generosity towards other's.
Second is the example of A Raja, Member of Parliament of India, who is accused of the largest scam of known as "2G Spectrum Scam". He was even put behind the bar's for the same thing but today known care's because he is generous towards his people i.e belonging to his constituency. Eventually due to his appealing behaviour citizen's forgot the scam he made and steal billion's of dollar from poor citizen's.
Third is the example of Rahul Gandhi, Member of Parliament of India, who is known for his defaming remark's on Prime Minister of India. He is widely criticized for his remark's by various party leader and even citizen's. It is not due to the wrong remark's, it is just because he is defaming a person who has an appealing image and every citizen follow's Prime Minister for his chauvinism for his country i.e. India.
I do completely agree with the state that a person should create an appealing image in order to grab more support's from public support whether you are criminal or not. But it's duty of citizen's to check the person thoroughly before following anyone for his appealing behaviour. Some are from birth generous and appealing while some create this image to hide the truth and reality from people's and make it implausible when it become overt.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 591, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...t end the person always tries to create an generous image for easy attraction of p...
^^
Line 2, column 218, Rule ID: ALSO_KNOW[1]
Message: Did you mean 'known'?
Suggestion: known
...CEO on skills and knowledge. He is also know for his generosity like donating more t...
^^^^
Line 2, column 218, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'known'.
Suggestion: known
...CEO on skills and knowledge. He is also know for his generosity like donating more t...
^^^^
Line 2, column 321, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...it in charity for the welfare of poors. He was also the largest sum donor in Covid...
^^
Line 2, column 484, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...ay everyone blindly follows his saying, its not because he is affluent person but b...
^^^
Line 5, column 424, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'becomes'?
Suggestion: becomes
...peoples and make it implausible when it become overt.
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, look, second, so, third, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 12.4196629213 8% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 33.0505617978 112% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 58.6224719101 109% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2066.0 2235.4752809 92% => OK
No of words: 436.0 442.535393258 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73853211009 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56953094068 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48844226786 2.79657885939 89% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 215.323595506 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.497706422018 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 671.4 704.065955056 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.0039761546 60.3974514979 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 108.736842105 118.986275619 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9473684211 23.4991977007 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.21951772744 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158484218238 0.243740707755 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0481152648448 0.0831039109588 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0635579568631 0.0758088955206 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0943161561957 0.150359130593 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0859343933931 0.0667264976115 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 14.1392134831 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 48.8420337079 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 12.1639044944 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 100.480337079 95% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 62.5 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.75 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 591, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...t end the person always tries to create an generous image for easy attraction of p...
^^
Line 2, column 218, Rule ID: ALSO_KNOW[1]
Message: Did you mean 'known'?
Suggestion: known
...CEO on skills and knowledge. He is also know for his generosity like donating more t...
^^^^
Line 2, column 218, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'known'.
Suggestion: known
...CEO on skills and knowledge. He is also know for his generosity like donating more t...
^^^^
Line 2, column 321, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...it in charity for the welfare of poors. He was also the largest sum donor in Covid...
^^
Line 2, column 484, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...ay everyone blindly follows his saying, its not because he is affluent person but b...
^^^
Line 5, column 424, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'becomes'?
Suggestion: becomes
...peoples and make it implausible when it become overt.
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, look, second, so, third, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 12.4196629213 8% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 33.0505617978 112% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 58.6224719101 109% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2066.0 2235.4752809 92% => OK
No of words: 436.0 442.535393258 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73853211009 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56953094068 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48844226786 2.79657885939 89% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 215.323595506 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.497706422018 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 671.4 704.065955056 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.0039761546 60.3974514979 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 108.736842105 118.986275619 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9473684211 23.4991977007 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.21951772744 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158484218238 0.243740707755 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0481152648448 0.0831039109588 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0635579568631 0.0758088955206 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0943161561957 0.150359130593 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0859343933931 0.0667264976115 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 14.1392134831 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 48.8420337079 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 12.1639044944 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 100.480337079 95% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 62.5 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.75 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.