Universities should require every student to take a variety of courses outside the student's field of study.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
Introduction:
The universities are all the world, for the students to perform many degrees based on their intrests. students have to just choose degree maybe like undergraduate or graduate degree. Now we talk about them it's confined to one course like cse,ece,civil,mech,eee and so on talk about engineering streem.In the same way there are many other branches and different groups to choose.Let's talk in detail about them as follows.
these days many students are just stick to the study field and there are many other courses which talk about life and to explore the world .but 80-90 percent students across the glob just take engineering streem or doctor's streem.Because it's been impacted from childhood by their parents or surroundings.so I suggest them like we need to have many other mandatory courses in universities ,such that students should definetly take a other course than respective field of study.
we need to have an alternative courses other than study field so that it will help the students in many ways like for example if chooses computer science and engineering and if the universities make an other alternative course with this course like pyschology ,biology which is completely different from cse students.so these type of combinations are very important to imporve students life.
if we talk about the other hand of the same issue then there are some people in countries who listen to parent's words and they just blindly join the course offered by their parents.but they realise that the field is very difficult when they join the course.This is only understood by the students.
Finally,I would like to conclude by saying that there are both advantages and disadvantages of the above statement but there are more advantages towords if we have an alternative study rather than just having only student's field study.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, may, so, then, for example, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 33.0505617978 82% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 58.6224719101 72% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1557.0 2235.4752809 70% => OK
No of words: 301.0 442.535393258 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17275747508 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.55969084622 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89035399242 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 215.323595506 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.504983388704 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 704.065955056 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 20.2370786517 35% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 43.0 23.0359550562 187% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 130.633308251 60.3974514979 216% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 222.428571429 118.986275619 187% => OK
Words per sentence: 43.0 23.4991977007 183% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.71428571429 5.21951772744 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 7.80617977528 231% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166943679731 0.243740707755 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0837918956222 0.0831039109588 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0612412963372 0.0758088955206 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100003810183 0.150359130593 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0625369676807 0.0667264976115 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.4 14.1392134831 173% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.83 48.8420337079 57% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.92365168539 164% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.1 12.1743820225 165% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.59 12.1639044944 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 100.480337079 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 19.2 11.2143820225 171% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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