Many lives might be saved if inoculations against cow flu were routinely administered to all people in areas where the disease is detected. However, since there is a small possibility that a person will die as a result of the inoculations, we cannot permit inoculations against cow flu to be routinely administered.
Introduction:
The above lines which are talking about the vaccination or immunization against cow flu.many lives would be saved if they get correct inoculation at right time against the flu.It is very necessary to inoculate by each and every person.now the two lines in the paragraph are making some conclusions like however there is a small possibility that a person will die after inoculations.and we can't allow inoculation be routinely monitored.
Firstly,When the disease is detect at certain place then only giving vaccine is not at all right.because the flu maybe spread faster than expected so it's better to inoculate everyone.And they have claimed that they are monitoring all people in areas where disease in high.But there is no evidence that how they are administrating the people.For example do they test everyone by going to every home? or they don't even have any statistical data about the people who got tested positive and negative.
The important step is that government should have a clear data analysis of the people .without that they couldn't come to conclusion we have been be administrating everyone.
Secondly,when we look at only small amount of people are going to die as a result of inoculation ,here also the same thing they don't have any information regarding this and any analysis about how many die and how many are safe.
Thirdly,they said we cannot permit vaccination against cow flu to be routinely administrated ,In the beginning of the para they said they are monitoring every person where ever the flu got spread and now it's against to the statement.Finally I would like to conclude by saying it would be better if we have the evidences and government should take the initiative and administrate everyone.
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Comments
e-rater score report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.0 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 7 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 11 2
No. of Sentences: 5 15
No. of Words: 299 350
No. of Characters: 1436 1500
No. of Different Words: 160 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.158 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.803 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.785 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 91 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 66 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 49 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 36 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 59.8 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 20.884 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.8 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.531 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.788 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.243 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 3 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Introduction: The above lines which are talking about the vaccination ...
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Line 2, column 147, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...be saved if they get correct inoculation at right time against the flu.It is very...
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Line 2, column 179, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: It
...culation at right time against the flu.It is very necessary to inoculate by each ...
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Line 2, column 392, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...rson will die after inoculations.and we cant allow inoculation be routinely monitore...
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Line 4, column 8, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , When
...ation be routinely monitored. Firstly,When the disease is detect at certain place ...
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Line 4, column 29, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'detected'.
Suggestion: detected
...nitored. Firstly,When the disease is detect at certain place then only giving vacci...
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Line 4, column 184, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: And
...ted so its better to inoculate everyone.And they have claimed that they are monitor...
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Line 4, column 273, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: But
...l people in areas where disease in high.But there is no evidence that how they are ...
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Line 4, column 342, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: For
... how they are administrating the people.For example do they test everyone by going ...
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Line 4, column 400, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Or
...y test everyone by going to every home? or they dont even have any statistical dat...
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Line 4, column 408, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...veryone by going to every home? or they dont even have any statistical data about th...
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Line 5, column 38, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
.... The important step is that government should have a clear data analysis of the...
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Line 5, column 87, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...have a clear data analysis of the people .without that they couldnt come to conclu...
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Line 5, column 107, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...alysis of the people .without that they couldnt come to conclusion we have been be admi...
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Line 5, column 147, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
...couldnt come to conclusion we have been be administrating everyone. Secondly,when...
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Line 6, column 9, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , when
...en be administrating everyone. Secondly,when we look at only small amount of people ...
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Line 6, column 97, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... going to die as a result of inoculation ,here also the same thing they dont have ...
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Line 6, column 129, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...culation ,here also the same thing they dont have any information regarding this and...
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Line 6, column 197, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun die seems to be countable; consider using: 'many dice', 'many dies'.
Suggestion: many dice; many dies
...garding this and any analysis about how many die and how many are safe. Thirdly,the...
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Line 9, column 8, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , they
... die and how many are safe. Thirdly,they said we cannot permit vaccination again...
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Line 9, column 93, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...st cow flu to be routinely administrated ,In the beginning of the para they said t...
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Line 9, column 234, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Finally
...ad and now its against to the statement.Finally I would like to conclude by saying it w...
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Line 9, column 234, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Finally,
...ad and now its against to the statement.Finally I would like to conclude by saying it w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, look, may, regarding, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly, for example, talking about, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.6327345309 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.9520958084 54% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 11.1786427146 107% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 13.6137724551 81% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 28.8173652695 94% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 55.5748502994 65% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 16.3942115768 73% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1474.0 2260.96107784 65% => OK
No of words: 288.0 441.139720559 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11805555556 5.12650576532 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.56307096286 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02859793938 2.78398813304 109% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 204.123752495 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541666666667 0.468620217663 116% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 705.55239521 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59920159681 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.96107784431 40% => OK
Article: 2.0 8.76447105788 23% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.70958083832 111% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.67365269461 239% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 19.7664670659 30% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 48.0 22.8473053892 210% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 130.404072874 57.8364921388 225% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 245.666666667 119.503703932 206% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 48.0 23.324526521 206% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 25.6666666667 5.70786347227 450% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 5.25449101796 438% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.20758483034 37% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 6.88822355289 44% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.67664670659 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.334013045159 0.218282227539 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.154374686223 0.0743258471296 208% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107778249261 0.0701772020484 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178862541648 0.128457276422 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101793182367 0.0628817314937 162% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 26.7 14.3799401198 186% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 14.3 48.3550499002 30% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.1628742515 222% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 23.2 12.197005988 190% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.3 12.5979740519 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.32208582834 109% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 98.500998004 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 32.0 12.3882235529 258% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 21.2 11.1389221557 190% => OK
text_standard: 27.0 11.9071856287 227% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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