You do not have to follow success, the success itself follows you. But you must adhere to the cause of failure that helps you grow in your respective field. The prompt states that, to become successful people, we have to learn valuable lessons from our failures and certain limitations that we have faced rather than our successes. I strongly agree with this prompt for the following three persuasive reasons.
To begin, Keep your face to the sunshine and never bend your head during the period of failure. Failure is the key to success. For instance, the famous American author and trainer, Helen Keller, was inborn blind and deaf. She abided so many problems during her life but she was an indefatigable person, thus she never irresolute in her worst period of life. The result is in front of you, she became a famous author in the world and a role model for deaf and blind people. She proved that blind and deaf people also can communicate to each other. The above example shows that we should never vacillate from the negative scenarios, do better and never be dissuaded. Struggle is a crucial friend to success.
Furthermore, sometimes success ruins the scenario rather than progression. For Instance, Npolean Bonopart, a great French military commander and political leader who earned a lot of success in this life but in the second half of his history, he became unsuccessful. When his success was at the peak point and due to this reason he had become totally supercilious. But when he tried to invade Russia, he failed. So accomplishment always has not a good consequences. That’s why for better achievement, we have to learn from the failure situation, not from the success and enjoyable scenarios that happened in our past lives.
Finally, perseverance is the major tool for succeeding. For instance, Micheal Jorden, a famous Basketball player of 21th century. He has conquered the NBA record in basketball history. But his life was not so easy. He was thrown out from the Basketball tournament during his school period so many times. Similarly, he could not score so many times in his career but never quit himself. Hence, some struggles and some limitations guide the person for the way to success.
Hence, we have to learn lessons from the disappointment and some limitations that we face, not from the success
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 451, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'consequence'?
Suggestion: consequence
...So accomplishment always has not a good consequences. That’s why for better achievement, we ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, furthermore, hence, if, second, similarly, so, thus, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 33.0505617978 151% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 58.6224719101 75% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1938.0 2235.4752809 87% => OK
No of words: 395.0 442.535393258 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90632911392 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45809453852 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6421163338 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 215.323595506 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526582278481 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 589.5 704.065955056 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 6.24550561798 224% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.2370786517 128% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.6523178521 60.3974514979 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.5384615385 118.986275619 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1923076923 23.4991977007 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.26923076923 5.21951772744 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 5.13820224719 214% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.307885245085 0.243740707755 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.073426250941 0.0831039109588 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118572709161 0.0758088955206 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194706846688 0.150359130593 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109363508133 0.0667264976115 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 14.1392134831 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 48.8420337079 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 12.1743820225 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 12.1639044944 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 100.480337079 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.8971910112 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 451, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'consequence'?
Suggestion: consequence
...So accomplishment always has not a good consequences. That’s why for better achievement, we ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, furthermore, hence, if, second, similarly, so, thus, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 33.0505617978 151% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 58.6224719101 75% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1938.0 2235.4752809 87% => OK
No of words: 395.0 442.535393258 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90632911392 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45809453852 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6421163338 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 215.323595506 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526582278481 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 589.5 704.065955056 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 6.24550561798 224% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.2370786517 128% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.6523178521 60.3974514979 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.5384615385 118.986275619 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1923076923 23.4991977007 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.26923076923 5.21951772744 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 5.13820224719 214% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.307885245085 0.243740707755 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.073426250941 0.0831039109588 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118572709161 0.0758088955206 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194706846688 0.150359130593 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109363508133 0.0667264976115 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 14.1392134831 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 48.8420337079 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 12.1743820225 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 12.1639044944 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 100.480337079 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.8971910112 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.