The charts below give information on the ages of the population of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050.Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The charts below give information on the ages of the population of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050.

Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts below show information about the ages of population between Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projection for 2050.

At the first diagram states that the population, in Yemen, was dominated by 0-14 years old with 50.1%. Whereas, Italy, in 2000, had peaked by 15 -59 years old as the most population in 61.6%. On the other hand, both pf countries more than 60 years old placed the lowest position in the diagram each 3.6% for Yemen and 24.1% to Italy.

Secondly, in 2050, both countries are forecasted that they will be changed in citizenship due to the diagram. First of all, Italy will be henpecked by 15 – 59 years old with 46.2% and Yemen also is predicted that the latter country would be bounced population between 15-59 years old but 60 years old also would be the second most habitation by 42.3 while people who is between 0-14 years old would be dominant in Yemen, in 2050.

All things consider that in 50 years later would be boom population for different ages in both countries.

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in 2000 and projection for 2050.
in 2000 and the projection for 2050.

At the first diagram states that
At the first diagram it states that
the first diagram states that

both pf countries more than 60 years old placed the lowest position
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would be bounced population
would be bounced with population

in 50 years later would be boom population
in 50 years later there would be a boom population

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