The graph below shows female unemployment rates in each country of the United Kingdom in 2013 and 2014.

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The graph below shows female unemployment rates in each country of the United Kingdom in 2013 and 2014.

The graph illustrates the unemployment rate of female in four different major countries of the United Kingdom between 2013 and 2014.

It can be seen that the unemployment rates of female in 2013 is more than in 2014 in the question. The female unemployment in England had the highest rate with 6.8% in 2013, as opposed to the rate of 6.5% in 2014.

The lowest female unemployment rates was in Wales, with a rate of 5.4% while Northern Ireland had 5.6% in 2013. Moreover, both countries unemployment rates of women dropped slightly, with 0.4% and 1%, respectively, in 2014.

Similarly, in Northern Ireland, the percentage of employed women decreased from 5.6% to 4.6%, which was the highest fell, among to these four major countries.

It is noticeable that the female unemployment rate increased from 6.1% to 6.7% in Scotland in the given period.

Overall, the unemployment rates of women in England, Wales and Northern Ireland had decreased over the period, while, Scotland increased in 2014.

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