The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport

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The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport

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How many of goods carried by different types of transport
How many of goods are carried by different types of transport

despite slightly fluctuations
despite the slight fluctuations

Sentence: Between 1974 and 1994, despite a little fluctuations, the quantities of goods carried by road rised marginally at 79.
Error: rised Suggestion: No alternate word

Sentence: As regards rail,despite some erratics, the quantities of goods hovered around 40.
Error: erratics Suggestion: No alternate word

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Score: 6.5 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 10 10
No. of Words: 204 200
No. of Characters: 1025 1000
No. of Different Words: 115 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.779 4.0
Average Word Length: 5.025 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.817 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 70 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 54 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 38 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 28 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 20.4 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 4.587 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.4 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.465 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.664 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.1 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4