The graphs below give information about computer ownership as a percentage of the population between 2002 and 2010, and by level of education for the years 2002 and 2010.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar charts depicted data regarding computer ownership, with an advanced analysis based on the level of education between 2002 until 2010.
According to the first chart, there has been a significant arousal of computer ownership since 2002. It started with slightly below 60% and in 2010 reached to almost 80%. This amounts shows a fairly growth of approximately 30% of the computer over the years.
Similar with the second chart which is more specified by the education levels, also showing a gradually increase. The percentages of computer ownership in 2002 are slightly low for those who didn’t graduate high school with only 15% and increased by following the stages of education. In 2010 however, shows a much higher rate of having private computers. The significant increase is showing similarity to those in 2002 but slightly higher with the greatest amount of almost 100% for those pursuing postgraduate studies.
This indicates the consumption of having computer at home has accelerated and become a trend linear to the educational levels.
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The bar charts depicted data regarding computer ownership,
The bar charts depicted the data regarding computer ownership,
This amounts shows a fairly growth
This amounts shows fairly a growth
This amounts shows a fair growth
Similar with the second chart which is more specified by the education levels, also showing a gradually increase.
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In 2010 however, shows a much higher rate of having private computers.
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