the bar chart below show the percentage of the population aged 65 and over in three countreis in 1980, 2000 and prediction for 2030.
The bar graph illustrates the demographic variation of people age 65 and more in Canada, Germany, and the UK in 1980 and 2000, and the expected percentage in 2030. Units are measured in percentage.
Overall, Germany has more percentage of aged citizens in 1980 and 2000 and it will be expected to increase in 2030 when compared to the other two countries. However, Canada and Germany show a systematic growth in elderly people over the three years.
In 1980, Canada has onLY 10% of people with 65year and over in contrast to 15% in Germany and around 13 % in the UK. While after 20 years Germany has a 5% increase in the population of elderly with 20%. Whereas the other two countries were around 15% IN 2000.
Furthermore, the percentage of people 65 years and above in 2030 will be predicted to rose by about 25% in Germany and 19% in the UK, and 22% in Canada. in addition, Canada shows a tremendous increase in a number of older people compared to previous years with7% in compared to approximately 5% in the other two countries.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, whereas, while, in addition, in contrast, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 33.7804878049 127% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 857.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 185.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63243243243 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63980684571 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.502702702703 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 258.3 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.9462524307 43.030603864 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.2222222222 112.824112599 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5555555556 22.9334400587 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.66666666667 5.23603664747 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248984690486 0.215688989381 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0997663950624 0.103423049105 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0813356176873 0.0843802449381 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165968141017 0.15604864568 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0700722953041 0.0819641961636 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.2329268293 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 11.4140731707 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.