The bar chart below shows the number of students who chose certain university subjects in 2005

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The bar chart below shows the number of students who chose certain university subjects in 2005.

The bar chart compares the number of students who chose certain university subjects in 2005. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
In general, of all certain subjects, Sciences is chosen the most by female students, while male students choose more Social Sciences. Above all, Social Science is also the subject that most students choose.
Specifically, Social Science has up to 25 thousand male students, which only less than 15 thousand female students choose. Science, on the other hand, has about 20 thousand female students, with only 10 thousand male students choosing. For Language and Mathematics, there are quite large differences, The Language has a number of male students accounting for nearly 20 thousand and females have less than 3000, for Mathematics, female students make up more but less than 5000 and male have nearly 20 thousand students.

It seems that students are also quite interested in Literature, the number of students enrolled is about the mid-range, male account for 15 thousand and female are less than about 11 thousand. Humanities has an almost equal number of male and female students enrolled at about 10 thousand students. Law and The Arts are not much chosen by students. In both male and female students, there are fewer than 10 thousand students.

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Average: 6.7 (2 votes)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, while, in general, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1146.0 965.302439024 119% => OK
No of words: 218.0 196.424390244 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25688073394 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63384253601 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.481651376147 0.547539520022 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 338.4 283.868780488 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 61.8288760803 43.030603864 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.181818182 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8181818182 22.9334400587 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.23603664747 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190031270495 0.215688989381 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114855114994 0.103423049105 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.211550240183 0.0843802449381 251% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180147669933 0.15604864568 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.171413415051 0.0819641961636 209% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 61.2550243902 85% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 11.4140731707 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.97 8.06136585366 86% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, while, in general, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1146.0 965.302439024 119% => OK
No of words: 218.0 196.424390244 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25688073394 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63384253601 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.481651376147 0.547539520022 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 338.4 283.868780488 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 61.8288760803 43.030603864 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.181818182 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8181818182 22.9334400587 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.23603664747 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190031270495 0.215688989381 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114855114994 0.103423049105 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.211550240183 0.0843802449381 251% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180147669933 0.15604864568 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.171413415051 0.0819641961636 209% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 61.2550243902 85% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 11.4140731707 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.97 8.06136585366 86% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.