The bar chart below shows the number of students who chose certain university subjects in 2005

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The bar chart below shows the number of students who chose certain university subjects in 2005.

The bar chart below shows the number of students who chose certain university subjects in 2005. The subjects mentioned are Sciences, Mathematics, Social Sciences, Languages, Humanities, The Arts (Subject like Art, Music, Drama), Literature, Law. In general, there is a very high disparity between male and female except for Humanities. For male, the love of sciences is the highest (about 22 thousand students) and the lowest is Languages (about 2 thousand students). In contrast to male, the Social Sciences (about 25 thousand students) is the most popular subject for female and the lowest is Mathematics (about 4 thousand students). In particular, there are subject with very high differences between male and female such as male students in Math accounting for up to 18 thousand students but female only 4 thousand students or the male students in Languages only makes up 2 thousand students but female makes up 18 thousand students. Through the above-mentioned figures, it is clear that the disparity between the favorite subjects in male and female.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, except for, in contrast, in general, in particular, such as, in contrast to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 878.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 168.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22619047619 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81725630829 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 83.0 106.607317073 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.494047619048 0.547539520022 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 265.5 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.8962034858 43.030603864 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.428571429 112.824112599 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 22.9334400587 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.5714285714 5.23603664747 240% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 3.83414634146 26% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26825231861 0.215688989381 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.188172168482 0.103423049105 182% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.332707814373 0.0843802449381 394% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.26825231861 0.15604864568 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0819641961636 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.2329268293 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 61.2550243902 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.3012195122 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 11.4140731707 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum two paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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