The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010
The bar graph illustrates the proportion of males and females in Australia who organized in various aged groups and did sports exercises regularly in 2010.
In general, it can be seen that, the highest per cent of activities for men were in 15 to 24 age group and for women bright in aged group (45 to 54). Whereas the lowest rate appeared in 35 to 44 age group for men and from 65 to above group for women.
Begin with men groups, it can observed that, the percentage of bodily actions were 52.8 % for 15 to 24 age group then for 25 to 34 aged group declined significantly to 42.2 per cent. The decreasing slightly continued in next age group (35 to 44), reached to 39.5%. After that the proportion went up gradually in following groups (45 to 54, 55 to 64, 65 and over) to 43.1%, 45.1%, and 46.7% respectively.
Moving on women groups, it can be witnessed that, for the first group (15 to 24), the rate were 47.7%, which was lower than the percentage in men group for the same group. Then the percentages grew up slowly until reached to peak (53.3%) for 45 to 54 age group. In next two groups(55 to 64, and 65 and above ) declined markedly to stood on 47.1% for 65 and above group.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 121, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'sport'
Suggestion: sport
...rganized in various aged groups and did sports exercises regularly in 2010. In genera...
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Line 3, column 31, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'observe'
Suggestion: observe
...r women. Begin with men groups, it can observed that, the percentage of bodily actions ...
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Line 3, column 113, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tions were 52.8 % for 15 to 24 age group then for 25 to 34 aged group declined si...
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Line 4, column 303, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ext two groups55 to 64, and 65 and above declined markedly to stood on 47.1% for ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, then, whereas, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 951.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 222.0 196.424390244 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.28378378378 4.92477711251 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3849336393 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.513513513514 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 261.0 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.3490531069 43.030603864 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.666666667 112.824112599 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6666666667 22.9334400587 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262604310216 0.215688989381 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129070202241 0.103423049105 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0710887354808 0.0843802449381 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193165974072 0.15604864568 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0472607939889 0.0819641961636 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.2329268293 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.96 61.2550243902 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.84 11.4140731707 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.32 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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