the diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity

Essay topics:

the diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity

The given figure illustrates the production of electric of cities or countries in many stages by using geothermal power.
In general, it can be seen that the production starts from cold water and ends at turbine which generates electric.
The production process consists of 5 phrases, it can be observed that, first phrase starts by pumps down cold water inside tunnel with its length is 4.5 kilo meters. Then, in second phrase called injection well, the water pushes to hot rocks in geothermal zone. After that, in third phrase named production well, the warm water pumps up to condenser. In forth phrase the condenser produces a stream and send to turbine. Finally, the turbine is powered by stream and sent to generator. The generator is powered by turbine itself to produce electricity which is used in our homes and factories. This electric sends a thousand kilo meters by cables to other parts of country.

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Average: 6.1 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 105, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... that, first phrase starts by pumps down cold water inside tunnel with its lengt...
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Line 3, column 131, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... by pumps down cold water inside tunnel with its length is 4.5 kilo meters. Then...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, second, then, third, well, in general

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 762.0 965.302439024 79% => OK
No of words: 154.0 196.424390244 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94805194805 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52273666998 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52356076087 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.623376623377 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 230.4 283.868780488 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.9851815254 43.030603864 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.6666666667 112.824112599 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1111111111 22.9334400587 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.88888888889 5.23603664747 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127903863351 0.215688989381 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0584240655238 0.103423049105 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0675698151624 0.0843802449381 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0925377225503 0.15604864568 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0704484368357 0.0819641961636 86% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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