the bar chart below shows the three min causes of land damage in four different areas in the world.
The given bar chart illustrates major causes which have negative impacts on land in four continents in the world.
Overall, except for Asia with the most destructive factor being tree-cutting, other regions’ land are being damaged mainly due to breeding. Moreover, land deterioration in Africa and Asia is more severe than in Australia and Europe.
It is evident that a more tremendous square surface of land in Africa and Asia is being destructed with breeding and tree-cutting are the main causes respectively, damaging around 500 million hectares of land in Africa and approximately 450 million hectares in Asia. In addition, an other culprit harmful to Asian land, resulting in damages that are in close parity to those caused by tree-cutting is farming.
Meanwhile, the situation is less serious in Australia and Europe. The main root of land deterioration witnessed in both nations is breeding which destructed around 250 million hectares of land in the former region, doubling the damages in the latter area. The other causes harmed only under 100 million hectares each in these two areas.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ly, damaging around 500 million hectares of land in Africa and approximately 450 ...
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Message: Did you mean 'another'? This word sequence is usually spelled together.
Suggestion: another
... million hectares in Asia. In addition, an other culprit harmful to Asian land, resultin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
moreover, while, except for, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 936.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 177.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28813559322 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83766588327 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576271186441 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 287.1 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.9576468243 43.030603864 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.0 112.824112599 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.125 22.9334400587 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.23603664747 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 1.13902439024 702% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222558001055 0.215688989381 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.098882128116 0.103423049105 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0825308774027 0.0843802449381 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154728969525 0.15604864568 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0803600372927 0.0819641961636 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 61.2550243902 80% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 11.4140731707 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.06136585366 115% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 40.7170731707 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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