The bar chart shows the percentage of small medium large companies which used social media for business purposes between 2012 to 2016

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The bar chart shows the percentage of small, medium, large companies which used social media for business purposes between 2012 to 2016.

The bar chart provides data on the percentage of small, medium, and large corporations which used social media for business purposes in 5 consecutive years from 2012 to 2016.

Overall, all three types of business witnessed an upward trend over the examined period and saw a significant downfall in 2015. A prominent feature is that large business possessed the highest percentage of social media presence.

In the first 3 years, the upsurge of medium companies using social media was the most significant among the three types of business, from just above three out of ten to nearly a half. Meanwhile, the percentage of small business possessing social media presence increased gradually by 10 % from approximately a quarter, and the proportion of large corporations with social media remained relatively stable at about 78%.

In 2015, small, medium, and large business hit the bottom with 30%, 30%, and roughly 52% of social media presence respectively. All figures then leveled up dramatically and reached a peak of a half, about 52%, and nearly four-fifths.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 63, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, then, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 900.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 171.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26315789474 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84285085319 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608187134503 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 268.2 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 0.482926829268 1035% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.9752766551 43.030603864 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.571428571 112.824112599 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4285714286 22.9334400587 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.71428571429 5.23603664747 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.449488129742 0.215688989381 208% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.206816688064 0.103423049105 200% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.193150037042 0.0843802449381 229% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.29421953164 0.15604864568 189% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.199566969217 0.0819641961636 243% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.2329268293 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 61.2550243902 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.3012195122 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 11.4140731707 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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