The bar charts illustrate the average house expenses in England and its capital city London and to present the comparison regarding the average house prices between distinct areas of England within the year 2013

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The bar charts illustrate the average house expenses in England and its capital city – London, and to present the comparison regarding the average house prices between distinct areas of England within the year 2013.

Given are two bar charts depicting the disparity in accommodation prices in the UK and London over a period of 18 years, starting from 1995 and in each specific area belonged to England within the year 2013.
It is conspicuous that the expense for housing achieved a remarkable increase regardless of the geographical aspect over the years shown. Furthermore, of all places in England, London people seemed to pay the highest amount of money for houses in 2013.
As the information supplied in the first bar chart, despite an exponential climb in the average cost for housing in England from 130000 to sharply 200000 pounds in 2013, this number was still a half lower than that recorded in its capital with over 420000 pounds in the same year.
When it comes to separate areas in England, London was deemed to be listed on the top due to its highest housing prices when approximately 400000 pounds was used to pay, which was followed by South East with approximately 320000 pounds documented in 2013. South West and North West people were likely not to expense much on housing compared to South East with 270000 pounds and 200000 pounds respectively. In opposition, North East’s housing cost was the lowest among all places with only 100000 pounds on average paid while 10000 pounds higher was for Midlands in the same year.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, so, still, while, as for

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 33.7804878049 130% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1103.0 965.302439024 114% => OK
No of words: 227.0 196.424390244 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.859030837 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51133006734 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 106.607317073 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568281938326 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 310.5 283.868780488 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 22.4926829268 142% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.4218190771 43.030603864 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 157.571428571 112.824112599 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.4285714286 22.9334400587 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.85714285714 5.23603664747 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309180968708 0.215688989381 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.149125453813 0.103423049105 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0600960755918 0.0843802449381 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202549132737 0.15604864568 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.030127536751 0.0819641961636 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 13.2329268293 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.92 61.2550243902 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.3012195122 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.5 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.9970731707 135% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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