The bar charts illustrate the average house expenses in England and its capital city London and to present the comparison regarding the average house prices between distinct areas of England within the year 2013

Essay topics:

The bar charts illustrate the average house expenses in England and its capital city – London, and to present the comparison regarding the average house prices between distinct areas of England within the year 2013

The given bar chart sheds lights on the average accommodation value in the UK and its capital city - London in 1995 and 2013 while the other indicates the disparity in accommodation price in six different areas of the UK.
As can be seen from the graph, the 1995-2013 period witness a surge in house prices all over England and London citizens have to pay the highest housing expenditures.
When it comes to the growth rate of housing, it is noticeable that accommodation price in London always remained higher than that of England during the 1995-2013 period. While England’s housing cost rose from 130000 in 1995 to 200000 in 2013, house price in its capital was already 200000 in 1995, it then climbed to over 400000 in 2013, more than twice times its original cost.
Considering housing expenditure in other parts of England in 2013, inhabitants in South east, South West and North West have to pay considerably high housing cost, at around 320000, 270000 and 200000 respectively. At the same year, accommodation cost in Midlands is just 110000, just a third of the South East’s price. The figure for Northeast is even lower, just 100000, a quarter of that in London, this is also the lowest data recorded in the whole graph.

Votes
Average: 8.4 (1 vote)
This essay topic by users
Post date Users Rates Link to Content
2023-06-01 Mollymaul 84 view
2023-01-07 anhduong 11 view
2022-11-05 Trần Thị Ước 84 view
2022-07-23 nhattram39 84 view
2022-07-15 Taytor2609 84 view
Essays by user nhattram39 :

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, then, third, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1026.0 965.302439024 106% => OK
No of words: 212.0 196.424390244 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83962264151 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6114852033 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 106.607317073 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584905660377 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 288.9 283.868780488 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 22.4926829268 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 39.5670446256 43.030603864 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.571428571 112.824112599 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.2857142857 22.9334400587 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.57142857143 5.23603664747 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.326840782992 0.215688989381 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.139466120714 0.103423049105 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0756078172102 0.0843802449381 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196929884112 0.15604864568 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0450280053574 0.0819641961636 55% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.2329268293 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.95 61.2550243902 95% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.3012195122 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.9970731707 127% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 11.0658536585 154% => OK
What are above readability scores?

---------------------

Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.