Task 1: The bar charts illustrate the average house expenses in England and its capital city – London, and to present the comparison regarding the average house prices between distinct areas of England within the year 2013.
The given charts illustrate how much an average house costs in England and its capital London as well as comparing different urbans of England in term of the average house costs in 2013.
From an overall perspective, the number of people who live in London had to pay far more for a house compared to the country's average house price. Moreover, a standard house in London cost the most, whereas the least expensive one could be found in North East.
In the first graph, there was an upward trend in the house expenses in England generally and particularly in London from 1995 to 2013. In 1995, the house price in England was about 14,000 pounds and 20,000 pounds in London, more than 6,000 pounds. Subsequently, England’s house expenses and those of London rose significantly, roughly 20,000 pounds and 400,000 pounds respectively in 2013, nearly twice as much as the country's average.
In detail, top of the list was its capital, around 40,000 pounds per house. Next came South East, South West, North West, that figures about 32,000 pounds, 27,000 pounds and 20,000 pounds respectively. On the other hand, dwellers had to pay an extremely cheap price in North East and Midlands, just quite 10,000 pounds.
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- Task 1 The bar charts illustrate the average house expenses in England and its capital city London and to present the comparison regarding the average house prices between distinct areas of England within the year 2013 84
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
The given charts illustrate how much an average house cos...
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Suggestion:
...uth West, North West, that figures about 32,000 pounds, 27,000 pounds and 20,000 ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, so, well, whereas, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1009.0 965.302439024 105% => OK
No of words: 205.0 196.424390244 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92195121951 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43469860298 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 106.607317073 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565853658537 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 276.3 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.5310738572 43.030603864 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.111111111 112.824112599 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7777777778 22.9334400587 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 5.23603664747 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282157541401 0.215688989381 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135149984122 0.103423049105 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118728429281 0.0843802449381 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210291265961 0.15604864568 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.13869639781 0.0819641961636 169% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.2329268293 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 74.53 61.2550243902 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.12 8.06136585366 88% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.