The rendered bar graph compares and contrasts the number of students who studied six different subjects of computer science including linguistics, psychology, natural science, engineering, programming and mathematics in a university of United State during the year 2011.
In an overview, the most outstanding feature to be observed is that the number of male research students studying computer science subjects was maximum in comparison with female students, except linguistics.
In detailed analysis, the number of women in majority while choosing linguistics with 120 as against as men with 80. Noticeably, preference to psychology showed an opposite trend of linguistics, merely 50 numbers of students different can be witnessed, when it comes to psychology. surprisingly, both gender had similar interest in a subject of nature science with 200 students for each.
Turning to rest of description, two-times as many male students were opting programming as compared with female research students, 150 in total. For selecting engineering, students especially males were same in number as they were in programming. Interestingly,the number of male students in comparison with female research students was realitively larger in terms of studying mathematics
- The bar graph below shows the numbers of male and female research students studying six computer science subjects at a US university in 2011 95
- Some people believe that travelling within a city is better by car while some other think bicycle is a better means Discuss both sides and give your opinion 84
- More and more people do online shopping Why is this the situation What is the effect of online shopping on shops and communities 78
- Some Think That It Is More Important For Children To Engage In Outdoor Activities Instead Of Playing Video Games 56
- It is often said that governments spend too much money on projects to protect wildlife while there are other problems that are more important Do you agree or disagree 89
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1084.0 965.302439024 112% => OK
No of words: 186.0 196.424390244 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.82795698925 4.92477711251 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.22342205784 2.65546596893 121% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602150537634 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 325.8 283.868780488 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.45097560976 124% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.8828300574 43.030603864 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.5 112.824112599 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.25 22.9334400587 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.625 5.23603664747 31% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.3973516294 0.215688989381 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.165462440472 0.103423049105 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101005366742 0.0843802449381 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.245148012083 0.15604864568 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.076690104514 0.0819641961636 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 13.2329268293 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 61.2550243902 51% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.3012195122 142% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.83 11.4140731707 147% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.79 8.06136585366 121% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 40.7170731707 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.4329268293 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.