More and more people do online shopping Why is this the situation What is the effect of online shopping on shops and communities

Irrefutably, purchasing products through websites is being preferred by increasing the number of people. This essy intends to analyse the reasons why online shopping is becoming increasingly popular among people of today’s generation and repercussions of online shopping on societies and shops.

There are umpteen reasons why large number of people give priority to online shopping. First and foremost, buying goods online allows users to save precious time and money. For example, modern technology has made it possible to purchase products within fraction of seconds though different sites such as Amazon and flipkart. Undeniably, people having knowledge of online shopping do not need to approach local stores and malls in order to purchase products. In this way, people can save their time. Besides this, massive discounts are offered especially on weekends and special days. Interestingly, online shopping enables people to save money as well.

There are numerous effects of doing online shopping on local shops and communities. To embark with, undoubtedly, trend to visit stores would reduce and society members surely become spendthrifts owing to online shopping. To demonstrate it, typically people are able to purchase popular brands of world. Despite have this fact, people invest excessively on trivial things while sitting at home. In the presence of shopping websites, people’s interest towards local malls is more likely to change over time.

To recapitulate, as per my above discussion, it is apparent that online shopping make people extravagant and native shopping comlex will attains a back seat in terms product marketing. However, purchasing products online brings countless advantages to human and believed to be highly appreciable.

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Average: 7.8 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'attain'
Suggestion: attain
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, however, if, second, so, well, while, for example, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1501.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.64285714286 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74475483835 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.65037593985 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.8865578861 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.8125 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.625 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.625 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.462277669401 0.244688304435 189% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.146713667812 0.084324248473 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.135821518358 0.0667982634062 203% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.285416964141 0.151304729494 189% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0460520744423 0.056905535591 81% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.14 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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