THE CART BELOW SHOWS THE CHANGES IN CAR OWNERSHIP IN GREAT BRITAIN BETWEEN 1961 AND 2001
The graph gives data about the percentage of households owning a car in Great Britain over the period from 1961 to 2001.
Overall, it could be seen that the number of cars that the British owned had trend upward while the other figures went down.
During the period from 1961 to 1981, there was a considerable decrease in the percentage of households owning no car in Great Britain between 1961 and 1981, from about 65 % to 35 %. Subsequently, the figure fell slightly to 28% in 2001.
on contrast, there was significant growth to 15% of the percentage of households both owned one car and owned more than ones in Great Britain, with about 50% and 15% respectively. In 1981, the percentage of households owning one car reached a peak to 50% However, there was a trend in upward in owning more than two cars, around 28%, but the percentage of owning one car saw slightly reduce to 45% in 2001.
Finally, It can be said that there was a significant rise in the number of cars ownership of Great Britain over the 40 years.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: On
...e figure fell slightly to 28% in 2001. on contrast, there was significant growth ...
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Line 4, column 121, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
... both owned one car and owned more than ones in Great Britain, with about 50% and 15...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, however, if, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 840.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 184.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.5652173913 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50616075219 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 88.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.478260869565 0.547539520022 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 240.3 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.7616200106 43.030603864 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.0 112.824112599 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2857142857 22.9334400587 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.57142857143 5.23603664747 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240338794657 0.215688989381 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131824193249 0.103423049105 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0748887455534 0.0843802449381 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160346110052 0.15604864568 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0784987903347 0.0819641961636 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.2329268293 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.47 61.2550243902 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 11.4140731707 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.16 8.06136585366 89% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 40.7170731707 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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