The best way for the government to reduce traffic congestion is to provide free public transport 24 hours a day 7 days a week. Do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays traffic jam is one of the most serious problems in big cities and it has made people’s lives more difficult. That’s the fact of life that a lot of people spend a huge amount of time every day stuck in traffic jams or experience problems while commuting. In many ways THESE problems seem insoluble, because of their complexity and versatility.
Undoubtedly, the government should search for ways to deal with transportation problems and look at the alternative to improve urban mobility. But the advantages of free transport system ARE infinitesimal when compared with the harm CAUSED BY THIS SYSTEM, because money the government could take from public transport ticket sales could be used to improve public transport system. In case of free city transport system, the government will be compelled to solve pecuniary problems using legislation, regulations and taxes in other ways.
In my opinion, it would be far more beneficial for riders to be contributed to more convenient transport facilities in order to lower traffic congestion. The quality of public transport letS people use it instead of cars which could decrease road capacity and as a consequence could help solve the problem of traffic blockage. Thus, the public transport system in Amsterdam is a prime example of safe and convenient alternative to cars. Every year ___ fewer and fewer people use cars and prefer to commute by bicycles, trams, trolleybuses and buses.
To sum up, attractive public transport could solve the harmFUL problem of traffic congestion more effectively rather than the opportunity to use it for free.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, thus, while, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1364.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28682170543 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91060797173 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585271317829 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.680036146 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.0 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4545454545 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.09090909091 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20653291512 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0790725781349 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0468267148426 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130071081103 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0409003373523 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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