New technologies provided machines that replaced workers to do certain physical jobs and tasks. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
It is true that modern technologies in terms of replacement of the employees with robots is a key area of recent scientific research and become a double-edged sword, with broad implications for all human societies. While I accept that this field of technology may have its dangers, I believe that the benefits of such type of engineering outweigh the drawbacks.
One evident benefit to use new technologies, for example robots, for working issues is that they can do repetitive monotonous tasks much better than humans as they can work all time without getting distracted or stressed out because of boring activities. What is more, new technologies programmed robots to precise, repetitive motion and they are less likely to make mistakes doing monotonous tasks. Such ensuring humanity with new work power, requires releasing people from being a labor and have an opportunity to do more creative work.
On the other hand, there are obvious disadvantages to using robots instead of the people in physical jobs. I think, that crux of the matter lies in possibility of unemployment for the great quantity of people. I am sure that the vast majority of businesses won’t put the person’s heeds on the first place, instead of it, they will probably think about their benefits and money they would earn. If government decide not to help people using legislation, regulations and taxes, a lot of people will be unemployed.
In conclusion, while robots have already done tremendous leaps in their performance and capabilities and we can see clearly how they can help people to get rid of monotonous jobs and be more creative, a lot of work should be done to ensure predictable, harmonized and transparent situation on the labor market.
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- With the recent development in the technology like e-books some people feel that the printed media like books, newspapers and magazine will soon be a thing of the past. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? 78
- The best way for the government to reduce traffic congestion is to provide free public transport 24 hours a day 7 days a week Do you agree or disagree 76
- New technologies provided machines that replaced workers to do certain physical jobs and tasks Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages 78
- Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems.Discuss both these views and give your opinion. 78
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, so, while, for example, i think, in conclusion, it is true, what is more, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1460.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1048951049 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93690475765 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622377622378 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.4739642912 49.4020404114 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.0 106.682146367 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.6 20.7667163134 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140757107128 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0561812369262 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0523461575057 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0721739946341 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0515367820928 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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