The chart below gives information about the amount of time children spend with their parents
the given bar charts illustrate the differences in the amount of time children spend with their parents.
Overall, as can be clearly seen from the charts, children spend more time with their families on the weekends rather than on weekdays. In which, kids from 2 to 7 likely stay with their parents much more than other groups of age.
To begin with, children spend more hours with mom than with dad on weekdays. All groups of age from 0 to 9 spend about 6 hours with mom, that is more than a third of time as staying with dad. Children aged 0 to 1, 4-5, and 8-9 spend approximately 2 to 3 hours with both parents, twice as much as others.
On the weekends, there is a reversed trend in time spent with mom and both mom and dad. It is witnessed that they stay with their parents nearly 6 hours, compared to about 4 hours with mom at all ages. Regarding the given data, kids from 4-5 spend nearly one and a half hours with their dad, rank the first position. While other their counterparts spend about one hour for their father.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, regarding, third, while, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 838.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 193.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.34196891192 4.92477711251 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.19908972013 2.65546596893 83% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.512953367876 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 227.7 283.868780488 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 18.9380569225 43.030603864 44% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 83.8 112.824112599 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3 22.9334400587 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.9 5.23603664747 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.394229763231 0.215688989381 183% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.195825107189 0.103423049105 189% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0843457823403 0.0843802449381 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.291104979733 0.15604864568 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0731489809572 0.0819641961636 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 13.2329268293 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 86.03 61.2550243902 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.3012195122 58% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.89 11.4140731707 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.54 8.06136585366 81% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 40.7170731707 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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