The chart below gives information about global population percentages and distribution of wealth by region

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The chart below gives information about global population percentages and distribution of wealth by region.

The bar chart elucidates the proportion of world wealth and population distribution by region.
Overall, the global wealth indicator is the highest in 3 various continents which are Noth America, Europe, Rich Asia-Pacific, and the biggest percentage of residents reside in China while the other countries have the lowest number of population.
To begin with, North America is a leader in global wealth proportion by almost 35 percent. However, Europe is in the second richest place by approximately 30 percent with a 5 percent difference from North America. Rich Asia-Pacific is the third rich region by 24 percent with a 6 percent difference comparing to Europe. The other regions like China, other Asia Pacific, Africa, and Latin America is in the least position.
Moreover, the distribution of the global population is the biggest in China with almost 25 percent whilst the other 2 countries such as Other Asia Pacific and India have the same rates by pretty more than 15 percent when Europe made up approximately 15 percent. Unfortunately, North America, Africa, Latin America, and Rich Asia- Pacific are in the lowest position.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 396, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (America) must be used with a third-person verb: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, second, third, while, such as, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.97073170732 277% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 954.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 183.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2131147541 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86590012022 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540983606557 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 306.9 283.868780488 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.0055632125 43.030603864 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.25 112.824112599 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.875 22.9334400587 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 5.23603664747 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151569578709 0.215688989381 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.086643623481 0.103423049105 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102112124147 0.0843802449381 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141957159992 0.15604864568 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.114445930649 0.0819641961636 140% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 61.2550243902 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.3012195122 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 11.4140731707 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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