The chart below shows the amount spent on six consumer goods in four European countries.
The chart compares the money spent for different purposes in four European countries. It is clearly evident that in all sector british people spend more money than others. Three other countries have some oscillation, ups and downs and some time they showed upward tendency.
Let us begin with Germany, they expanded poor amount of money in these mentioned six consumer products. People of Germany spended a remarkable portion of money in personal stereos and buying perfumes. For buying this six goods Italy had some fluctuations and spending money in toys was the peak point of it.At the beginning of the chart France had some oscillation while it showed an upward tendency at the ending point point. In purposes of photographic film they were spend a massive money. At last people of Britain, spending rate of money was more higher than others. Generally, for solding this goods they spended a massive money and photographic film were their highest investment and even culmination for the chart.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 242, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...For buying this six goods Italy had some fluctuations and spending money in toys ...
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Line 3, column 309, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: At
... money in toys was the peak point of it.At the beginning of the chart France had s...
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Line 3, column 416, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: point
...showed an upward tendency at the ending point point. In purposes of photographic film they ...
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Line 3, column 472, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'spent'.
Suggestion: spent
...purposes of photographic film they were spend a massive money. At last people of Brit...
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Line 3, column 478, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'massive money'.
Suggestion: massive money
...es of photographic film they were spend a massive money. At last people of Britain, spending ra...
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Line 3, column 549, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'higher' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: higher
... of Britain, spending rate of money was more higher than others. Generally, for solding thi...
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Line 3, column 597, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...her than others. Generally, for solding this goods they spended a massive money and ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 5.60731707317 232% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 18.0 33.7804878049 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 837.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 164.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10365853659 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50605305284 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603658536585 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 252.0 283.868780488 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.7628638141 43.030603864 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.0 112.824112599 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2222222222 22.9334400587 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.44444444444 5.23603664747 28% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178756113332 0.215688989381 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0699905566634 0.103423049105 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.076884756244 0.0843802449381 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147441681681 0.15604864568 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0310321256817 0.0819641961636 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 11.4140731707 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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