Some people think the spread of multinational companies and globalization produce positive outcomes for everyone. Do you agree or disagree with the statement?
Globalization brought a significant change in companies across the world. Infact,it is the way to become closer both consumer and employer. I think spreading multinational companies has a positive outcomes for every types of people of our community. Im the forthcoming paragraph I shall explain why and how it is lucrative for the humankind.
Globalization and multinational companies have a great impact to our economy of a country as well as in our community. By increasing number of multinational companies the GDP and productivity of any country wiil soar. The government will be able to fulfill the basic needs of their citizen. After fulfilling the local demand, any country wiil supply their goods to whole world by using benefits of globalization.
Secondly, as at present industries are growing tremendously, workplaces are also plumating similarly. The youth and dexterous person have a chance to prove their intellectual skill and make themselves to be an employed one. For globalization it has become very easy to find a new job and work for any multinational company. Nowadays, many of company started taking benefits of globalization and offer doing the work by sitting at home to the employer.
Furthermore, because of globalization and numerous companies selling any product competition reach at peak. Most of the companies started providing discount or sometime even offer to the consumer. Thus, people are able to get a good product by spending little amount.
On the other hand, multinational companies and globalization provides a number of downsides. By using the invention of globalization, some companies deceive their customer. That it has a bad influence to everyone. As more and more companies are growing, production are also increasing similiarly. That really augmenting various pollution and it harmful for our environment.
Productivity of numerous companies and globalization have both side. So, we need to take the positive side. The point which I have discussed requires no more discussion about it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, really, second, secondly, similarly, so, thus, well, i think, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1729.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42006269592 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.25473380258 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551724137931 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 553.5 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.8885249798 49.4020404114 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 75.1739130435 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.8695652174 20.7667163134 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.95652173913 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251320398527 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0690364584336 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0812077579482 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128564708696 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.064825635423 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.82 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.56 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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