The key solution for the environmental issues for the current generation to live a less comfortable life to benefit future generation To what extent do you agree or disagree | TOEFL IELTS GMAT GRE SAT ACT PTE ESL

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The key solution for the environmental issues for the current generation to live a less comfortable life to benefit future generation. To what extent do you agree or disagree

At present, environmental pollution already created an alarming situation. In order to lead a better life in future current generation must need to conduct their life with some changes in their lifestyle. In the forthcoming paragraph I shall explain how they change their life for the necessary of upcoming generation.

Let us commence with global warming ; it is mainly caused by amitting Carbon di oxide to the atmosphere. Many research and studies proved that the huge bulk of Carbon di oxide comes from burning fossil fuels; and now a days the number of vehicles are increasing tremendously. So, a large amount of carbon amitting to the earth per single day. If the current generation interested to cope up with this problem, they must need to switch to non motorized or any eco friendly motorized system. That might slower the lifestyle of present generations humankind.

Using different types of chemicals alao had an effect to the environmental issue. Infact, it is one of the most silent killer to the earth. In this industrialised era, manifold chemicals are being used to produce numerous things. Moreover, plenty of chemical mixture are also used in agricultural sector which pollutes the soil. If we have a look foe the solution for it; we must need to give up using harmful substances in all the sector ; thus our agricultural sector may be affected a lot because chemical are used for removing fatal diseases of plant. By avoiding it, the amount of food production may dwindle and it has an effect to economy and lifestyle of present generation.

Furthermore, current generation have to look for renewable energy sources. Because, all of non renewable energy pollute the environment more. Another crucial form of pollution are plastic and CFC.CFC soaring day by day because the number of AC and refrigerator increasing tremendously. In order to solve this problem the percentage of this two must need to diminish. This may hard the lifestyle of running generation but it has an enormous benifits to the future generation. Instead of plastic, paper and cloth based bag should be uswd; although it plunge the price of any consumer goods.This might be affected the economy of present.

In conclusion, environmental issues already turned into crucial one. Present generation make some changes in their lifestyle thus the pollution rate will shrink and future generation will lead life with more healthy environment.

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IELTS Writing Task II - IELTS Academic

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...lk of Carbon di oxide comes from burning fossil fuels; and now a days the number ...
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...mes from burning fossil fuels; and now a days the number of vehicles are increasing t...
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...t might slower the lifestyle of present generations humankind. Using different types of...
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...ctor which pollutes the soil. If we have a look foe the solution for it; we must ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, look, may, moreover, so, thus, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2040.0 1615.20841683 126% => OK
No of words: 396.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15151515152 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46091344257 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83601013058 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54797979798 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 654.3 506.74238477 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.0069185286 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.7272727273 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.27272727273 7.06120827912 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181772849834 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0505168129765 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0619839803199 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112148171516 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0544896177577 0.056905535591 96% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, look, may, moreover, so, thus, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments