The chart below shows the annual pay (thousands of dollars) for doctors and other workers in seven countries in 2004
The supplied bar chart demonstrates the difference in the annual income between doctors and other occupations in seven nations in 2004.
Overall, it is conspicuous that doctors were paid much higher than other workers, especially the remarkably distinct disparity witnessed in the United States.
Doctors working in the USA earned 120 thousand US dollars per year, which is approximately three times higher than other jobs, compared to around 60 to 70 thousand US dollars given to the doctors living in the remaining nations on the list. In France and Switzerland, when the employees contributing their efforts in other industries received the maximum salary of 40 thousand US dollars, the average income of the doctors was recorded at 70 thousand US dollars.
In contrast, the annual wages of all workers in the rest countries on the mentioned list were much lower. In the more specific details, in all three countries namely Italy, Czech Republic, and Germany, the income for other types of employment was three times lowers than the doctors’ salary, which is at $20,000 and over $60,000 respectively, compared to the difference of $20,000 recorded in Finland.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 106, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 977.0 965.302439024 101% => OK
No of words: 187.0 196.424390244 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22459893048 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73989946907 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561497326203 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 288.0 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 22.4926829268 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.4454980757 43.030603864 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 162.833333333 112.824112599 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.1666666667 22.9334400587 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 5.23603664747 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300713514679 0.215688989381 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.142538409658 0.103423049105 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0684572397435 0.0843802449381 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167363867638 0.15604864568 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0739162879853 0.0819641961636 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.7 13.2329268293 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 61.2550243902 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.3012195122 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.59 11.4140731707 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.9 8.06136585366 123% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 40.7170731707 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.9970731707 131% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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