The chart below shows global sales of the top five mobile phone brands between 2009 and 2013.
The bar chart illustrates data about the sales of the 5 most popular global mobile brands from 2009 to 2013. Units are measured in millions.
Overall, it can be seen that both samsung and nokia have the highest number of sales, whereas apple, lg and zte have the lowest sales over the period shown.
In 2009, samsung sold about 250 million phones, while nokia sold approximately 450 million phones. In contrast, the sales of apple's phone was about 10 million, which was the lowest number between the five brands in the three years , compared to lg and zte sales which was about 120 million and slightly below 50 million respectively .
In 2011, the number of phones which were sold by samsung increased to around 320 million, as opposed to about 420 million phones sold by nokia. while the sales of apple, lg and zte remained less than 100 million.
By 2013, there was a dramatic growth in the sales of samsung's phone to about 450 million, while the sales of nokia dropped considerably to reach slightly over 250 million. In contrast, the sales of apple's phone rose to less than 150 million. lg and zte sales remained less 100 million.
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Suggestion: While
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, whereas, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 954.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 200.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24745932648 2.65546596893 85% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 263.7 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.6841000592 43.030603864 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.4 112.824112599 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 22.9334400587 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.1 5.23603664747 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221210061969 0.215688989381 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0980264024422 0.103423049105 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0976448278166 0.0843802449381 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140894408375 0.15604864568 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0959235102792 0.0819641961636 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.2329268293 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 61.2550243902 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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