The chart below shows the proportions of graduates from Brighton University in 2019 entering different employment sectors.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie chart illustrates the rate of graduated students who worked in various sectors from Brighton University in 2019.
In general, it is obvious that the service and manufacturing industries were the most popular choices. In addition, the percentage of students working in sports was the lowest.
For industry, service industries was the most-chosen sector which attracted about a third (33%) of graduates. Following was manufacturing industry, with 16.3% of students choosing this area. The percentage of students working in education was about 15% and the figure for politics and government was 3% fewer.
While there were pretty the same rates in students working in transportation and science, at 7.8% and 7.3% respectively, 5.6% chose civil service. The least popular choices were charity and sport with under 1%. Finally, 2.8% of students worked in unspecified sectors.
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