The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates the percentage of buying coffee and tea and also the drinking habits five different cities in Australia for last four weeks.
In general, although the percentage of people who went to café fluctuated, the demand for fresh coffee decreased steadily throughout the period while the instant coffee had completely reverse of this situation. Despite this, the total percentage of using café for coffee and tea was higher than fresh and instant coffee in last 4 weeks.
As can be seen, the money spent to going the café just more than 60 percent in Sydney, which increased about 3 percent in Melbourne. It decreased slightly in Brisbane and Adelaide before that had a massive increased around 10 percent in Hobart. The instant coffee had a upward trend approximately 9 percent in the first three cities and after that fell just under 6 percent in Adeliade before that rose in Hobart.
The circumstance was different for fresh coffee in four last weeks. In Sydney the percentage of residents who bought fresh coffee was around 43 percent, that reduced in Melbourne and Brisbane. The situation was plateaued in Brisbane and Adeliade before that went up more the 35 percent in Hobart.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so, while, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1008.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 202.0 196.424390244 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9900990099 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55968840006 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.514851485149 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 296.1 283.868780488 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.6813509793 43.030603864 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.0 112.824112599 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4444444444 22.9334400587 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.22222222222 5.23603664747 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119303612719 0.215688989381 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0564274660384 0.103423049105 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0677974608102 0.0843802449381 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0962901550004 0.15604864568 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0830021551391 0.0819641961636 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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