The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls in the UK, divided into three categories, from 1995 – 2002.
The graph gives information about how much telephone calls in 3 types of telephone calls in the United Kingdom.
In general, it can be clearly seen that mobile calls and the international and national calls experieneced an increase in almost 10 years. On the other hand, the local telephone had a fluctuate.
The minutes in mobile calls in 1995 was approximately 2 or 3 billions. It rose gradually from 1995 to 1998. In 1998, it two times higher than in 1996, which it was about 5 billions. Then it increased sharply in 2000 (above 20 billions) and it continued to rise remarkably in 2001. In 2001, it was about 40 billions minutes. In 2002, it reached nearly to 50 billions.
The national and international calls was in 40 billions minutes in 1995. Then there was a climb slightly in the next 4 years. It was about 40 billions in 1996 and 42 billions minutes in 1997. It was above 55 billions minutes in 2000, compared to 50 billions in 1998. In the end of 2002, it still went up gradually when it only reached to 60 billions.
About seventy billions minutes calls was a figure of local calls in 1995. It was saw a stead increase in 1999. It reached to the top of a peak in 1999, about 90 billions calls. After that, it witnessed a significant decrease in next 3 years. It was about 70 billions in 2002.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 182, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...the other hand, the local telephone had a fluctuate. The minutes in mobile calls in 1995 w...
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Line 5, column 81, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'sawed', 'sawn', 'seen'.
Suggestion: sawed; sawn; seen
...a figure of local calls in 1995. It was saw a stead increase in 1999. It reached to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, still, then, in general, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 5.60731707317 321% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 33.7804878049 142% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1067.0 965.302439024 111% => OK
No of words: 240.0 196.424390244 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.44583333333 4.92477711251 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62849965126 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 106.607317073 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.470833333333 0.547539520022 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 298.8 283.868780488 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 1.53170731707 783% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 3.36585365854 267% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 8.94146341463 212% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 12.0 22.4926829268 53% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.0974096846 43.030603864 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 56.1578947368 112.824112599 50% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.6315789474 22.9334400587 55% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.42105263158 5.23603664747 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 3.70975609756 243% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.09268292683 244% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22363062316 0.215688989381 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0839715509079 0.103423049105 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.068703722945 0.0843802449381 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138628822934 0.15604864568 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0320272358156 0.0819641961636 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.8 13.2329268293 44% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 93.14 61.2550243902 152% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 3.3 10.3012195122 32% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.64 11.4140731707 67% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.4 8.06136585366 79% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.9970731707 62% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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