The chart shows the number of mobile phones and landlines per 100 people in selected countries.
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information given.
The given bar chart represents data on cellphones and telephones per 100 people in 7 (picked/chosen) nations. At the first glance, there are 3 countries which have the residents who own telephones more than cellphones.
As shown in the illustration, among the countries which is using mobile phones lower than land lines, Canada just nearly reach 40/100 people and is the lowest owning mobile phones nation when compare with orthers. Denmark has the number of people using mobile phones as much as telephones, both of 2 types of phone are over 80/100 people. Although, the level owning cellphones of American people are not high, they are ranked in the second place about using land lines.
In the second cluster includes 4 countries which using mobile phones is more popular. The number of people owning cellphones in Italy is huge variant from telephones. As the depiction of the graph, there is 90/100 people using mobile phones whereas just over 40/100 Italian who want to use land lines. Both Sweden and the UK have the number of mobile phones over 80/100 people. However, the difference between mobile phones and land lines in the UK is quite large, this is not appeared in Sweden. Lastly, Germany holds the fifth position among 7 selected countries both two compared content.
To sum up, there are 5 nations which have the great number of mobiles phone per 100 people. Besides, telephone is still favorite means of connection in some countries.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 174, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'phones'' or 'phone's'?
Suggestion: phones'; phone's
... people and is the lowest owning mobile phones nation when compare with orthers. Denma...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, however, if, lastly, second, so, still, whereas, to sum up, in the second place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1211.0 965.302439024 125% => OK
No of words: 244.0 196.424390244 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9631147541 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41733457549 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 106.607317073 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532786885246 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 367.2 283.868780488 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.5709142535 43.030603864 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.1538461538 112.824112599 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7692307692 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.30769230769 5.23603664747 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288386005547 0.215688989381 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114231298059 0.103423049105 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0677439701333 0.0843802449381 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183710761115 0.15604864568 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0351451439065 0.0819641961636 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 40.7170731707 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.