The charts below give information about USA marriage and divorce rates between 1970 and 2000, and the marital status of adult Americans in two of the years.

Essay topics:

The charts below give information about USA marriage and divorce rates between 1970 and 2000, and the marital status of adult Americans in two of the years.

The first chart gives data about marriages and divorces in the USA from 1970 to 2000 and the second one illustrates the percentage of adults according to their marital status in the two years.

Overall, the number of marriages in USA declined considerably whereas the figure for divorces varied unpredictably. It could be seen from the second chart that most adult Americans were married although the percentage of married people witnessed a decrease.

For the first ten years, there was a stability in the number of marriages which was 2.5 millions while a increase was seen in the other category from 1 to 1.4 millions in 1980. In the remaining of the period, the number of marriages went down regularly from 2,5 millions to 2 millions which is similar to that for divorces from 1.4 to 1 millions in the last year.

The proportion of married people was at the peak of 70% and then declined to 60% by 2000. Similarly, the figure of widowed adults went down to the bottom of the marital adult percentage scale at 5%. In contrast, there was same trends of increase between the number of married and divorced people from 15 to 20% with the former and from 1 to 9% with the latter.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 104, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... marriages which was 2.5 millions while a increase was seen in the other category...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, second, similarly, then, whereas, while, in contrast

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 33.7804878049 139% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 978.0 965.302439024 101% => OK
No of words: 210.0 196.424390244 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65714285714 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53583836048 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.480952380952 0.547539520022 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 288.0 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.2629287289 43.030603864 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.25 112.824112599 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.25 22.9334400587 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.375 5.23603664747 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26720007838 0.215688989381 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123755000441 0.103423049105 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.141158051616 0.0843802449381 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200810082003 0.15604864568 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.169965069081 0.0819641961636 207% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.2329268293 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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