The charts below give the information about USA marriage and divorce rates between 1970 and 2000, and the marital status of adult Americans in two of the years.

Essay topics:

The charts below give the information about USA marriage and divorce rates between 1970 and 2000, and the marital status of adult Americans in two of the years.

The charts show figure for the quantity of marriages and divorces in the period between 1970 and 2000 and the proportion of mature people in the United States in sectors of never married, married, widowed and divorces in 1970 and 2000. Overall, there was a steady reduction in the marriage rate in a span of 30 years and the number of married people gained the highest percentage in comparison with other sectors in both 1970 and 2000.

It is clear from the first chart that the number of marriages remained the same of 2.5 millions in 1970 and 1980. However, there was a slight decrease of marriage rate to 2.25 millions in 1990 and 2 millions in 2000. In the contrast, the quantity of divorces increased from 1 to 1.4 millions in the period between 1970 and 1980. After that period, this number reduced to 1.1 millions in 1990 and 1 million in 2000.

As it can be seen from the second chart that the percentage of the married took up the first place as compared with the rest sectors in both 1970 and 2000 with 70% and about 60% respectively. Similarly, never married stood at the second place with 15% in 1970 and 20% in 2000. It is apparent that the proportion of widowed decreased significantly from 8% to 2% in comparison between 1970 and 2000 while the divorces had the upward trend between 1970 and 2000, 5% and 9% respectively.

Votes
Average: 6.7 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, second, similarly, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 6.8 250% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 33.7804878049 148% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1105.0 965.302439024 114% => OK
No of words: 242.0 196.424390244 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56611570248 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45659332441 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.433884297521 0.547539520022 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 298.8 283.868780488 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.9305124438 43.030603864 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.777777778 112.824112599 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8888888889 22.9334400587 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 5.23603664747 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267085050809 0.215688989381 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125452491093 0.103423049105 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0578670300374 0.0843802449381 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192423618583 0.15604864568 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0352228324506 0.0819641961636 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.2329268293 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 78.93 61.2550243902 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 11.4140731707 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.95 8.06136585366 86% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 11.4329268293 149% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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