The charts below give Information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy In 2000 and projections for 2050.
The pie graphs displayed below show the percentages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 divided into 3 age groups and give projections for 2050. According to the given data, in 2000 more than half of the population of Yemen were under 14 years of age (50.1%), slightly less than a half were between 15 and 59 years old (46.3%), and only 3.6% were older adults of 60+ years of age. A the same time, in Italy the depicted population was different, with 6 out 10 people being in the 15-59 age group (61.6%), slightly less than one-quarter being 60+ years of age (24.1%) and just 14.3% of the Italians aged 14 or less. In the long run, it does not surprise that Yemeni will have a much younger population compared to Italians: the projections for 2050 based on the age groups show a significant rise in the 15-59 years compound for the Yemen population that will get up to 57.3%, while the Italian's will drop to a 46.2%, leaving Italians with almost twice their initial elderly persons percentage (42.3%).
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'A' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: A; The
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...with almost twice their initial elderly persons percentage 42.3%.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 820.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 182.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.50549450549 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38757602203 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587912087912 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 233.1 283.868780488 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 45.0 22.4926829268 200% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 83.6256539586 43.030603864 194% => OK
Chars per sentence: 205.0 112.824112599 182% => OK
Words per sentence: 45.5 22.9334400587 198% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.25 5.23603664747 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 3.83414634146 26% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.337553561539 0.215688989381 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.237571906712 0.103423049105 230% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.16914700513 0.0843802449381 200% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.337553561539 0.15604864568 216% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0819641961636 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.6 13.2329268293 171% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 10.3012195122 168% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.77 11.4140731707 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 40.7170731707 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 11.4329268293 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 20.0 10.9970731707 182% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum two paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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